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Chapter 13 is up!

Yay Chapter 14 is up! Now all I need is the epilogue, then on to the second "book"!

CAn i be in that one? Just finished reading the whole thing. Very nice. Although could be better with me... lol.

this really sounds like it wont end. you need somthing to really wrap it up. i know it's not the last, but to end the story the final chapter should mak it feel like it ended. the epilouge on the other hand... well you'll see.

You know vahn, when I went to bed last night I thought the same thing, and now, I feel I must explain as much as I can without giving away to much, so....

The story was called The Power of Vengeance, it was called that for a reason, and now that Mini Bert had gotten vengeance for Albert, the story has no more point, if I made another chapter after they killed rannu, then it would seem like Rannu didn't matter, the epilogue will explain more of this and about the next book, still don't know what to call it, but there will be more characters, like ton, beat x500, anjiru, cloud, but unlike this one, not all the hunters will be in the same place, the secong book will be a lot longer because I'll have to alternate views between hunters.

YAY im in the next one you can just call me 'beat' innit if ya want

ok beat, I'll call you beat, whats you char like?

Well my old char (the best one) was pretty cool what do need to know bout him really?

what he looks like, how he acts, his wep, if not his wep then I'll choose one that suits him.

Right, He is a HUmar, he is Lv.62, uses either a Lavis Cannon or Twin Brand, has a soniti mag lvl 200 he tends to be a bit secretive towards ppl but isnt disliked (online), lol) erm is that enough? Oh his suit is jet black