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Yeah...It's extraordinarily cheesey...The first five or so chapters, bomber5000 thought were cool...but it gets a bit weird later on...and besides which, Zweihander would never forgive me for what I wrote...HAHAHAH!

email me a copy, I don't really want to put the next trilogy up...but i will, no sense in writing a story and then hiding it..

...It will arrive....now!

I must leave now...Mini_Bert! DO NOT SHOW THAT STORY TO ANYONE ONLINE! ESPECIALLY ZWEIHANDER!!! OR I WILL BE PRETTY BUGGERED...

DarkMagician Wrote:I must leave now...Mini_Bert! DO NOT SHOW THAT STORY TO ANYONE ONLINE! ESPECIALLY ZWEIHANDER!!! OR I WILL BE PRETTY BUGGERED...

..I dont understand?

good...heh...

I've been sick all week so i havent read much, but from what I've read, I'd say ur defenitly improving, but the storyline progresses too fast, yet too slow at the same time....kinda odd...

Yeah...it is a bit odd...and I know there are some loose ends...by the way, how far are you?

EDIT: btw Mini_Bert...I found a black and white picture on some website, and colored it in. It is supposed to be one of my other characters, Sakura!

I just finished it, quite good, although some of the end would not be possible.

eheh...I want to know though: WHAT DOES EVERYONE THINK OF MY CUSTOM-COLOURED PIC? LOL If I found another few, I'd do some more...