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Deadly Zero Wrote:i got another idea Spider Lords and Spider Queens
They are giant, intelligent, but very deadly spiders that can speak and are used by the undead army as a way of transportation or to siege a castle or fortress.
like i said before you can change the description if you want

Thanks but I have an idea already.

ok but what is it???
*Deadly Zero starts poking grave guardian with a stick till he tells what the idea is*

If u don't stop I'll poke u with my scythe in the head I will try to write the next part tonight, if it is not up then it should be tomorrow.

alright just no scythes they hurt

Sorry but I was busy on the weekend so no next part. Give me maby two days.

take all the time you need...
Then Deadly Zero pulls out a gun when Grave is facing away and points it toward him*
Hehehehhe faster i wanna hear more lol

Chapter3: Accepting Fate“The time for you to join the ranks has come Grave. Prepare yourself for this may hurt.”
Grave was frozen, he couldn’t more. The Reaper came closer then he already had been, opening his mouth. “Your soul and will are mine.” He cried as a dark fog started to came from his mouth. When the fog came upon Graves face he started to feel a tug inside his body. The fog was pulling his soul out from his body! Then as if looking in a mirror, he saw his own face in front of him. As his soul was being pulled away, he started to feel the pain. I the writer can’t express the pain in words myself.
“AHHHHHH.” Grave started to yell as the Reaper started to cackle.
“Soon you will be mine. Ereshkigal.” The Reaper cried.
The pain stopped, Grave slummed over on the floor, breathing hard. He looked around everything seemed the same to him. He looked his body over, and was horrified at what had happened. He still has is cloak, but where fingers were supposed to be, there was only bone. He felt his face, nothing but bone.
“Oh fu** what the hell have you done to me.” He screamed at the Reaper.
“I have done you a great favor. Do to your power in life, I have made you a Skull Caster instead of starting at the lowest rank.”
“Thanks… I think. I will never obey you. You are death incarnate, and as evil as the Devil.”
“Normally I would give you a horrible death for comparing me to that thing. Evil I am not. If I were evil no souls would find rest.”
“No souls are at rest now. With your army how is any soul to find rest.” Grave said as he stood.
“There souls are not fighting it is there bodies and mind. The souls stay with me or another keeper. When the body dies the souls is put to rest. Now I must go I have more important business to addend to. You will find your spell book in your Caster Robes. Read it through and you will know the spells.” The Reaper started to leave, stooped and turned, “You can move through the ranks. Be careful of others under you, for they may want to go up in rank, and you are sitting in their way.”
“What so you mean I may be attacked by the others in the army, because they want to gain more power? And I can do the same?”
“That is what I mean yes. You are also wondering how to get out of here as well are you not?”
“Yeh that would be nice to know as well.”
“You will learn.” And with that the Reaper disappeared.
“Oh just fu**ing great.” Grave said as he looked through his robes to find the book. “Read it once and know it all, sounds like shit to me.” He started to flip through it reading every page. After a hour of reading. “Well shit, he was right. Now witch is the teleport spell.” He consecrated hard, feeling something going through him. “From one place to another, the darkness will move me to the place.” He spoke the words as a dark light glowed round him. “FLUX” He yelled, as the light consumed him and he disappeared. A few minutes later he appeared only a few yards from where he started. “It’s a start.” He said as he repeated the process. And disappeared again.

I will write more soon.

oohhhhh ahhhhh
i have another idea but you may not like it
its deathevn (word i made up)
they are evil looking soldiers that are very dangerous toward the living because touching them drains your life force

OOOO pretty good matey. Keep it up. I see a few more spelling errors

Chapter4: New Powers to Try With a Little Revenge
Out in a small field in the Forest of Ragol, Grave appeared with a sudden POOF of smoke. Thump “Oh, first time you go a couple of feet fine, second you end up twenty feet in the air and land on what’s left of your head, not cool. Third times a charm I hope.” Grave staggered to his feet, looking out at where he was. He started to walk a ways when he heard the fate sounds of a battle. “This could fun, I need something to take out steam on.” He started to creep over to were the sound was coming from. He poked his now skull head out from the bushes. What he saw was a lone FOnewman fighting a couple of Hildebears. “I know that face from some where.” Grave said to himself. He grabbed a peace of fruit from a close tree. He took a bite not taking his eye off the Newman. He looked down to see the fruit on the round. “Oh right not living anymore. That gives new meaning to the phrase “Falls right through me” I may never get used to that.” He looked back at the Newman who was just finishing off the Hidebears. He raised his hands in the air as a fireball erupted from the Hildebear. “I know that Rafoie anywhere. That’s Heintz, he almost had me killed once when he got to the target first and then told the client that I took off with the money. Maybe it is time for a little revenge.” He said as his eyes glowed red. He started to walk over to Heintz when a Fonewwearl appeared from the bushes to the left of him. “You did a wonderful job hon.” She said as she kissed him on the cheek. Grave jumped back into the bushes. “Now would not be the best of times I will wait.” Grave sat for an hour while the two Newman ate. The Newwearl got up and said, “Sorry but I must go I have other things to attend to.” With that she got up dropped a Telepipe and left. “Finally.” Grave said getting up. Heintz got up to leave himself when Grave yelled from the bushes. “Heintz whats the hurry? Can’t stick around for a minute to play?”
Heintz turned with a sudden start. “Who’s there?”
“Come on man you know who it is.”
“Grave is that you. If it is about the other day, I am sorry. But you know business is business.”
“Well this does have to do with the other day, but it more that just business. You almost had me killed.”
“Really I didn’t realize that the client would go to that drastic of measures.” Heintz said as a Mace of Adaman appeared in his hand.
“You know right well that will do no good to me.”
“Grave if it is a fight you want a fight you will get but enough with the shit get out and show yourself.”
Grave smiled a boney smile, pulled his robes hood over his head, and covered his arms with the sleeves to hide what had become of him. He started out from the bushes toward Heintz.
“Ah see that wasn’t to hard to come out of hiding now was it? Just how long have you been there?”
“Long enough to see everything.”
“Would that include the Newwearl?” He asked with a worried look on his face.
“Yes including the Newwearl.”
“You won’t tell anyone will you.”
“You won’t live long enough to care.”
Heintz ducked out of instanced of Graves scythe, and jumped away.