I figured I would indulge myself just this once and double post.
Here's the poem that I said I would put up.
Love is a bottomless pit,
once you fall there's no going back.
As I fell, I dropped a solitary man,
She didn't fell the same.
For what felt like an eternity,
I thought she was there too.
But when I finally awoke,
I found myself falling alone.
Hey I like 'em all so far. Great poetic talent, methinks. Keep going!
Now that it's completely over between me and my gf I can post this poem without feeling too bad. I wrote this ironically the day before she broke up with me.
Quote:A voice rises above the rest,
beckoning me to look.
I turn around and see her,
A blue-eyed blond-haired goddess.
She looks in my eyes,
I look in hers.
She continues singing,
just the same as before.
But there is something different,
now I know she's singing to me.
you kill me, pearly eye
i dont want you yet you make me live
i caint stop staring, pearly eye
you make me get up in the morning, go to sleep in the night.
you are my one and only, pearly eye
i use you every day, i dont deserve you
i sit back and smoke you, my pearly eye
i see that you have ruined my life, pearly eye
{crack}
Heres a poem I made in 5 minutes last night to make you laugh Zero....
I see your face, for but a brief moment
Oh how I long to stand in this moment forever
For your presence fills me with glee
But with that glee also comes a sickning feeling
What is this feeling that I feel?
That makes me feel like I can float
But makes me cry, it hurts so much
That makes my heart beat ever faster
But also impales it as if a javilin
What is this feeling that I feel?
Love, of course- get used to it- Foreshadow
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Did it make you laugh.... It made my friend laugh, so I figured you'd like it too...
Didn't make me laugh but it was a great poem.
Durn.... oh well.... I tried........
I'll post another poem later... right now my friend is erging me to play C.A.R.D with him....