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Pioneer2Log#13...
I am starting this journal to record my story. I was onboard Pioneer1. I am the only survivor of the strange explosion. My parents are dead. My friends are dead. The government keeps me in the hunters' district. They gave me a licensce. Section ID: Redria. Class Type: HUmar. Level: 158.
Enough formal stuff. I was found huddled up in the corner of the forest. A pack of savage wolves came and guarded me. I was found by a group of hunters. They brought me onboard this ship. I was told by the principle that as I was being medically treated I kept screaming "The Darkness!" I have no Idea what this means now, but something terrified me. We must leave Ragol now.
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Pioneer2Log#13
My name... I do not know my name. But on this strange weapon I was found with was printed the word: Chaos. The weapon is a large sword type weapon... I call myself Chaos after the seal on that strange black sword...
Someone, please help me. I must know the truth. I am going into those strange ruins. I must find why I fear the darkness so much... The medical examiner is coming. She's nice(beautiful) I hope our friendship grows.
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thats really short should add on to it bro but otherwise i think its ok

I plan to make more chapters, BRO!

Really good, I love the way you have used logs like a kind of diary entry, many famous noves use this technique (The woman in white, cure you english lit!)

I think this could go really well, try to research some wider vocabulary and you have it in the bag.

your talented

Chaos, The Fallen One V.2 is coming soon. (soon as I get around to doing it)