Here is the beginning of my story:
The clash of the mythical creatures
As the sun rose, the rays bounced off of the shimmering lake and onto the lush green grass. The golden hair of the knight known as Pyathogos dazzled passers-by as the watched him ride by on a dappled brown horse. He was wearing a silver suit of armour which caught the suns rays. The king had summoned him to do a task to save the whole town from certain death. There was not a cloud in the bright blue sky. As Pyathogos galloped to the palace gates, the guards stopped him from entering through the glittering golden gates to speak to the king. "Stop right there. What is your name and why are you here?" "The king wanted to see me and my name is Pyathogos" "Enter these gates and speak to your majesty. I'm terribly sorry, I didn't realise that you were Pyathogos." The guard scratched his head. "No problems." Replied Pyathogos.
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this is going to be one heck of a story! can't wait to see the rest of it! yay, keep going!
Chapter 2
As he lead his horse to the stables he pondered about what his task could be, "probably a simple retrieval task" He muttered to himself. He entered through the massive oak doors, walked under the portcullis and was escorted to the throne room by another guard. They opened the giant golden doors and went into the throne room. There were very bright tapestries all over the walls, there was a crystal chandelier on the ceiling and the throne was made of solid gold apart from the red padding on the back and the bit where you put your bottom. "Your majesty, what is my task?" Asked Pyathogos. "Your task is to..."
"your task is to..... clean my feet" lol just do it all atr one time then you will not get people like me getting angered that they cannot see all of this really good story. this would also be good if you updated the 1st post with the other Chapters just an idea
Chapter 3
"slay the following, a red dragon, a green dragon, a bone dragon, a hydra and a titan." Yowzer, isn't that too much for me to do in one go!" Exclaimed the knight. But he stopped due to a severe glare from one of the royal elite guards.
The king was slightly sympathetic as he said in his deep voice "It won't be easy but give it your best shot ok?" "I won't let you down king Francis III"
Pyathogos left the throne room and closed the door to whispered but heated disscussions about what he presumably thought were about him. "...he's our best one..." ".....if he dies we have no chance...." "......" "Well that's really consoled me" He thought sarcastically. He removed his gleaming sword, the excalibur from it's jewel encrusted sheath and examined it. "Well here goes".