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Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Kitsadoodles - 12-03-2006 Wow guys, your stuff is all amazing! keep posting, i really look forward to seeing more. you guys are really talented, keep it up! Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - nomercy - 13-03-2006 I can answer that one,Yoshi.It was in a folder which was stored on our old PC hard drive which i now use in my laptop as a slave drive.The links,as well as the pictures were all stored there. Not sure what will happen next as regards PSO ep III,as i have a bad case of mental block at the moment. Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Rena - 14-03-2006 She lay still In a golden field Surrounded by enemies He was her shield One,two,three struck down And he had hardly moved Four,five,six on the ground His vow was not yet proved But still the battle raged They all attacked him,swords in hand Fighting like animals caged He cut them down,they fell like sand Wow,i can write poems too! Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Kitsadoodles - 14-03-2006 Nice poem Rena! kind of scary and suspenseful in my opinion, which makes it an amazing poem. you guys are both great poets! Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Lee-yoshi - 14-03-2006 A whole family full of poets?! Guess it's a bit cliche to say '& they didnt even know it'
Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Rena - 14-03-2006 I was waiting for someone to say that. The bard sat against the tree And sang of times gone by Of times when wars were fought with swords And spears everywhere the eye could see Now,in this world so strange A different battle goes on Wars are fought with guns and bombs Of which have larger range 'A savior will come some day'they said Ha,they know nothing of this life They say he will come And to freedom we shall be led It must ache their hearts so much so When the almighty Gods let them down To abandon them without aid Their shepherds have let them go Could not humans get along To live with fellow man In this world you will die By putting one step wrong Sorry if this offends any religious people here. Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Talim009 - 15-03-2006 The poems ive read are very good and i can see the picture and hear the sounds. Your art has moved and the words as well. ____________________________________________________________________ I can make you feel pain just by speaking words that will turn you cold. Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Kitsadoodles - 15-03-2006 I like the new poem Rena. its the truth, sadly, which makes it so much more interesting and fun to read and think about. also, the rhyming pattern is very new with this poem, which i love. Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Rena - 15-03-2006 Ha ha,back in high school i was told that my poems and stories were completely rubbish by the teachers. Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff - Lee-yoshi - 16-03-2006 Fools, they're all fools... damn teachers
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