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Aurora Block - mimas - 01-10-2004
The coffee stuff was supposed to represent how my mother likes her coffee. Espresso, no milk, no sugar. Put milk in that and you get one unhappy mother.
On topic: hehehehe, Inner Asshole...
Aurora Block - sr388 - 02-10-2004
ok!?!? anyways i did not know you mother doesent like coffee with milk
now lets get back on topic and i really think its good why dont you mimas?
Aurora Block - mimas - 02-10-2004
ehh. I think a good humour story is good but it's getting a bit cute for my tastes, from the look of it. Not to say that it's a bad story so far, by any means, I just think it needs a bit of a darker touch.
Aurora Block - sr388 - 02-10-2004
ok its good to tell her so she knows what to improve and what to take away!
Aurora Block - mimas - 02-10-2004
Let's just hope that Feline Witch reads the comments when she gets back...
Aurora Block - sr388 - 03-10-2004
yupp couse it is a good story
Aurora Block - Gao Than - 10-10-2004
Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job!
*EDIT*
Oh, some action, u know, battles on ragol and stuff would be good too
Aurora Block - sr388 - 11-10-2004
hope she gets back soon shes on a vacation or something like that.
Aurora Block - Gao Than - 12-10-2004
Yeah, i need more sections
Aurora Block - cOoLdUdE - 12-10-2004
Gao Than Wrote:Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job!
*EDIT*
Oh, some action, u know, battles on ragol and stuff would be good too
You stole the words outa my mouth... NOW GIVE EM BACK