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My writting o_O - Ria - 27-01-2005
Er first off this is from an RPG I'm participating in. Sooo if you want to follow the whole story and read other people's posts go here - http://www.ayeka.net
I've highlighted in orange which is not my writting. I was really stuck at those points, gomen ~_~
Anyway this RPG is based in the Tenchi Universe. Evil Kiyone is my design based off the original Evil Kiyo. And Yakume is her daughter whom I made up.
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Narrator Kiyone suddenly found herself at what appeared to be Jurai at night, it was so dark she could barley make out the trees around her. She was about to step forward when a familier voice echoced from behind. Turning, she saw Tenchi standing with Yakume. Both revealed sad expressions on their face.
Kiyone: Tenchi? What's wrong? *begins to look concerned*
NarratorTenchi never changed his expression
Tenchi: I'm sorry, I can't risk it...
Kiyone: Risk what? What are talking about?
Narrator Yakume clung tightly at Tenchi's trousers. She looked scared..
Tenchi: *sighs* What happend so long ago, could become reality again. I don;t want to risk it..
Kiyone: What...?
Narrator Both of their figures began to shimmer and eventually blend in with the darkness around..
Kiyone: Tenchi! Wait! Where are you going?!
Narrator Kiyone reached out to them, but it was too late. They were gone. Kiyone looked down only to notice she had a red shadow. It slowly crept around her waist forming behind her. As soon as she heard it's voice she froze..
Dark Kiyone: About time they left... you don't need them. Not with all the power you have.
Kiyone: H..how are you real?
Dark Kiyone: I'm always there, inside you. You'll never be rid of me
Kiyone: No.... you're not me...GET AWAY FROM ME!
Narrator Kiyone swung around with her right arm, but her counter part was gone... so were the trees. Now her fear was slightly rising.. there was nothing around her, except the darkness now crawled slowly around her body. It was swallowing her up. But before it did and before she could scream........... she woke up.
Narrator Kiyone breathed heavily, she was sweating slightly from her nightmare.. just like the one she has all those years ago. Her brain told her it was just her worrying that brought the dream on, but her feeling thought otherwise.
Kiyone: *clutching her head* Ugh... what the hell was that?
Narrator Tenchi entered the room fully dressed in his casual clothes. He looked at Kiyone in concern.
Tenchi: Uh hey, did you sleep alright?
Kiyone: Umm yeah... just a bad dream that's all.
Tenchi: Alright, you need to get dressed. The Jurai ship is arriving soon.
Kiyone: *nods* Okay, I'm coming.
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Yakume: Wooooooooooooooow! *looks at the huge royal Jurai ship towering above them* Dat one?!
NarratorTenchi looked down smiling
Tenchi: Yes, that's the one!
Yakume continued to gaze at it until Kiyone placed her hand on her shoulder
Kiyone: Come on honey, it's time to go.
Yakume: *giggles* ok!
Narrator All three then made their way into the ship.
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All 3 travelers walked through the long corridor to the main hall. Just before they reached it, 2 guards stood infront. Both stood up right with their weapons drawn. As
they approached the guards, the sentrys had respectfully bowed and shuffled to the sides of the hallway. Except one didn't move enough, resulting in him knocking Kiyone slightly.
Kiyone: *giving him an odd look* Excuse me?...
The guard had coldly replied, not looking her in the eye
Guard: Sorry ma'am..
Before Kiyone could react to the guards action, Tenchi grabbed her hand softly and making an attempt to pull her away from the guard.
Tenchi: *lightly smiled * Come on Kiyone, lets continue
Kiyone looked at him for a brief second and acknowlaged his gensture to move away. How could she resist those eyes of his? Everytime she looked into his pupils, her heart sank deep into her chest.
Kiyone: *gave a shy smile* Ok.........darling
Tenchi couldn't help but blush slightly from that comment, almost anything word she spoke to him made him turn red in embarrasement. After a brief pause, the couple and their child contiuned to walk forward.
Once they arrived in the main hall, all were stunned by it's size. The gushing rivers and the rich plants seemed to spread endlessly. Yakume couldn't contain herself and ran straight into a mass of shimmering roses. Her voice was filled with pure excitement as she crawled though the larger than herself plant life. Kiyone and Tenchi couldn't help but smile at her childish antics.
Tenchi: I'll never get tired of this..
Kiyone turned her eyes towards him still smiling
Kiyone: *smiles* Yeah. Like a little angel
Tenchi: *turns towards her* How about you spend some time with her whilst I discuss the arrangments with Misaki?
Kiyone: *nodded* Sure, I'll see you later then..
Kiyone then cocked her head to the side, giving him a seductive wink. Tenchi caught on to what she ment, resulting in another blush.
Tenchi: A..alright, take care!
Tenchi and one of the guards made their way to the bridge of the ship. Meanwhile Kiyone and Yakume were spending time together in a small cove of tiny flowers. As Kiyone was wrapping her arms around her in a protective love way, Yakume picked numerous types and started making a flower chain.
Yakume: *turning her head slightly around* Look mommy!
Kiyone gave a slighlt giggle. She'd never thought eariler in her life would she would feel this way. Kiyone was really starting to get into this mother role now.
Kiyone: Is that for mommy?
Yakume nods with a bright smile on her face. Kiyone gave a light giggle as she pulled her hair up, allowing Yakume to neatly place it over her.
Kiyone gave Yakume's head a few strokes giving her praise
Kiyone: *smiling* Thank you. You're very skillful for your age.
Yakume cringed and giggled with embarissment, taking the praise to heart.
Yakume: It looks pwetty on you!
Kiyone: *smiling* Thank you hunny
Yakume couldn't contain herself any longer. So much lust for expressing her love towards her mother, she just had to show it! Yakume literally dived into Kiyone's stomach almost catching Kiyone by suprise, giving her an affenctionate huggle whilst nuzling her head into her belly
Yakume: Hehe, I wuv you mommy!
Kiyone embraced her child against her. She had realized that this moment is one of those priceless moments which demostrates what life is all about. A tearful sparkle formed in the corner of her eye and a second later it streamed down the side of her. The tear clutched the rim of her jawline for the next few seconds and then released, crashing down ever so lightly onto little Yakume's head.
Yakume looked up at her mother with a concerned look
Yakume: Whats wrong, mommy?
Kiyone smiled happily down at her child
Kiyone: Nothing is wrong, you make me so happy. I don't know what I would do if I were to ever lose you. My precious daughter...
Yakume wasn't familier with the word "precious", but clearly understood what her mother was saying. Her eyes shut tight, cringing from the praise yet again. Then she looked up deep into her mother's blue eyes, still holding that big smile on her face.
Yakume: What does pw... pwesu..
Kiyone: Precious mean?
Yakume bit her finger lightly nodding
Kiyone smiled as she placed her hand around Yakume's cheek, stroking it softly
Kiyone: Well... it means that I value you alot and I love you more than anything honey.
Yakume: Oooooh ok. You.. pwe.. pwec..
Kiyone looked at ever so softly as Yakume attempted to prenounce it.
Kiyone: You're doing great, you'll soon be talking perfectly.
Yakume polietly stuck her tongue out giggling lightly
Kiyone looked at her watch, it read 18.00hr
Kiyone: Well I think we should get you to bed, alright?
Yakume frowned in the cutest way imaginable. She looked down sulking, her mind was set on having more fun and exploring more of the huge garden.
Yakume: Awwww.... do I have to mommy?
Kiyone gave a weak smile but effectionate enough to appear happy.
Kiyone: You're a growing girl, you need to go to bed early honey. *smiles* ok?
Yakume looked up innocently. Her little finger was halfway in the mouth, then let out a small squeak.
Yakume: Ok mommy..
After, Yakume rubbed her eyes indicating that she was slowly getting drowzy. Kiyone shuffled forward and picked her up as if she was a newborn. Her child followed up by smiling weakly, it always warmed her little heart to be in mommy's arms. Kiyone lowerd her face towards her smiling
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Kiyone: Want to sleep with me tonight?
Yakume's eyes lit up, her head nodded with agreement
Yakume: Yay!!!
Kiyone chuckled lightly as they made their way to the bedroom. Tenchi would be late from arranging the wedding with Misaki, so she could take her time in getting ready for bed... or as she preferd to call it - time with Tenchi.
As she was dressing Yakume for bed, 2 slow knocks were heard on he door. Coudldn't of been Tenchi, he was still conversing with Misaki - right?
Kiyone: Who is it?
No answer, so Kiyone procceeded to open the door. The sight that greeted her were two trays full of cooked meals. Looking around, Kiyone didn't see who brought it. Maybe it was Tenchi? She shrugged picking both trays up and returning inside her room.
Yakume immediatly took notice of the steaming foods Kiyone was carrying, eventually sitting on the bed.
Yakume: Wooooow! So much!
Kiyone: *blinks* Yes, enough to fill us till our tummies explode!
Yakume giggles and scooted closer to a tray. Her eyes quickly focused on some yogurt, infact everything caught her eye! Yakume regonised the soup on the end was Tomato, her favourite. She picked up, gave it a quick sniff - then reached for some bread dipping it in.
Kiyone on the other hand, opted for the raw sushi with spicy sauce. Kiyone caught a
whiff of the sushi as she neared it to her mouth. The food smelt perfect and looked it too.
After their meal which took around 15 min to finish, Kiyone neatly stacked the remains outside the door. As soon as she re-enterd she spotted Yakume fast asleep on the bed.
Not too long after she walked a few paces, she felt slightly drowzy. Clutching her head, it began to feel light as if she was drunk. With what strenght she had left she dragged herself towards the bed, but fell unconcious just before making it to the bed, she collasped on the floor with a thud.
A few moments passed and suddenly the door slid open. One of the guards from eariler stepped in. He stepped slowly towards Kiyone's unmoving body giving her a look over.
Unconcious, the traquilizer worked. The guard kneeled then kneeled down and giving her a light poke to see if she was asleep. No movement, good. The guard's mouth opened, with a sickening sound he appeared to choke something up. A small black, red scorption like creature shot out. It's eyes were dead, emotionless. Then it turned around, it's tail slithering and stretching around the guard's neck. It's grip was abonrmally strong for something that looked so weak. The creature walked outside looking for a suitable disposure of the guard's body. It then neatly sat the guard up against a wall away from the room, then placed his arms in a folding position giving the impression the guard fell asleep whilst on duty.
Now to buisness. It had waited so long after it's previous plans were thwated by... Jurians. It's sole purpose of existance was to destroy them all. But this time, it knew how they operated and now it was going to strike back better than before.
Kiyone was in its path, she layed there not knowing her darkest nightmare was about to happen once again. The creature crawled towards her mouth, at last it would merge with her mind again. As soon as Kiyone's mouth opened wide enough to breath, it shot in like a bullet. Even though she was asleep, Kiyone twitched.
A few minutes later Kiyone awoke, feeling dazed and tired.
Kiyone Ugh.. what happend......
She rubbed her forehead as she stood up. Yakume also awoke feeling the same as Kiyone.
Yakume rubbed her eyes moaning slightly.
Yakume: Uh.. what happend mommy?
Kiyone: *scratches head* I guess we just got tired from the trip.
Suddenly Tenchi walked in wondering why the door was wide open. Kiyone turned around to face him slowly.
Tenchi: *smiling* Hey you two, everything's sorted now.
Kiyone lightly smiled gripping her hands together.
Kiyone: That's great, but I'm not sure if I understand royal Jurian weddings.
Tenchi thinked breifly, Misaki did tell him some of the customs. He walked forward
taking his shirt off. Followed by his trousers but leaving his pants on.
Tenchi: Well Misaki did tell me something about it, how about I explain in bed?
Tenchi gave a weak grin as he said that.
Kiyone obviously caught on to his weak lure, she raised a hand to her mouth chuckling.
Kiyone: *in a sedductive tone* Sure, I'd like that
After undressing herself and Yakume, Kiyone go into bed. Yakume also stayed, but soon fell asleep again as she hit the pillow. Tenchi and Kiyone watched smiling.
Kiyone: Aww.. look at her.
Tenchi wrapped his arm around Kiyone pulling her a few inches closer. she continued to watch Yakume until he spoke.
Tenchi: About that wedding, it's just like an earth one really but more tradtional. so there's no need to worry.
Kiyone nodded smiling as she lent in. Both hands cupped around his cheek as she kissed him shortly but softly. A few plesent moans were heard whilst they were expressing their love in a kiss. Laying down on the bed, Tenchi cuddled his arms around her chest in a loving embrace. His hands rubbed her gently, giving her a warm feeling of comfort.
Kiyone soon fell asleep under the comfort and Tenchi smiled warmly as he soon closed his eyes.
It didn't take Kiyone long do drift off into a deep sleep. As soon as she did, a familier dream began.
It appeared she was in space, the stars and nebulas far off obviously pointed that out. She was about to move, but found the only thing she could was her head. Not even a slight switch from her fingers. Here she was drifing through space, unable to move and getting tingles of fear running through her. Suddenly, someone grasped her shoulders turning her around.
Dark Kiyone: Hmmm... having troubles are we...?
Kiyone was angry, confused at the fact her alto ego continuesly appeared in her dreams.
Kiyone: Why do you continue to haunt me?!
Dark Kiyone smirked deviously as she cupped her claws around her cheeks
Dark Kiyone: It's time.. just relax and allow me to link to your mind..
Kiyone's expression froze as her claws touched her cheek, the words added more fear to her worries.
Kiyone: W..what are you talking about? You're dead, this isn't real!
Dark Kiyone: *raised a brow* Are you sure about that?
Kiyone: Get out of my dreams!
Dark Kiyone: How about I tell you this dear, think of what you can do... be rid of
Mihoshi forever and show those fools you aren't the lacking officor they think you are.
Kiyone: *screaming* NO!!!
Kiyone awoke gasping for breath, she was sweating slightly with Tenchi still cuddled around her. Her body suddenely began to feel awkard and she felt as if she was slipping from reality.
She slowly unwound Tenchi's arms from herself and carefully moving over Yakume to the floor. With the strange sensation her body was feeling it felt like she was walking on slime, feet feeling heavy and such. As she made her way towards the door, her body continuesly flushed with the overwhelming sensation of loosing control of her mind. Her body lost balance breifly causing her to slam into the nearvy wall. Recovering quickly she continued, breathing became heavier and her balance.
Kiyone's unstable body enterd the kitchen. She didn't even know why she was here, only the urge to fight the mental battle taking place was on her mind. Her body fall forward suddenly, knees thudding on the floor, unable to stand any longer. One hand reached for the table in an attempt to pull herself up, but her hands were almost numb. At first they twitched, then shook. Kiyone looked down to them, both eyes shot open wide from the sudden pain and sight. Skin from her top fingers bled, sharp boney claws ripped had ripped through the skins surface and began to shape into hooks.
On instinct Kiyone turned towards a wall and begun to claw at it with so much strenght the wall began to peel. The pain wasn't easing, nor the strenghting mental battle inside. Which by now obviously made her realise it was happening again, just like before. She gritted her teeth trying to keep the urge to scream in. Small noises were heard before she could no longer contain it and screamed in agony from the pain.
Back in the bedroom, Yakume's eyes opened quickly upon hearing the scream. Tenchi was still fast asleep. Yakume clutched her bunny plushie tightly, her face squirming.
Yakume: *slowly* Mommy?
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Yakume hopped off the bed with her plushie dragging behind her. Not too long after she got out the door, she looked around not sure where the scream came from. Another screamw as heard. This time Tenchi awoke, he instantly regnoised it as Kiyone's voice. He jolted upright and ran through the door. Unbeknwons to him, Yakume quietly followed eager to know.
Tenchi came to the kitchen with his heart banging faster. He slammed the doors wide open eyeing the room. There he saw Kiyone, shaking uncontrolably and around her he saw streams of blood. The wall looked like a cat clawed at it viciously. Yakume poked her head inside looking confused.
Tenchi however quickly approached Kiyone, he gripped her body in an attempt to calm her down.
Tenchi: Kiyone, are you alright?!
Kiyone let out a few grunts and groans, fighting over control of her own bodily functions.
Kiyone: Tenchi......take yakume.......and RUN!
Kiyone lets out a loud shrek. Within that second that Tenchi hestitates, a sliver of dark kiyone's personality flairs out. As this happens, the back of kiyone's claw whips backward into tenchi, flailing him backwards into the nearby wall. His body slides down wall and onto the floor, where he became sprawled out, his head was slumped forward. Kiyone lets out another shriek as she is losing control. Yakume runs to her father, attempting to wake him back to consciousness.
Success came at a right moment, with her hand on tenchi's face, his eyes open slowly. Kiyone looked up to see her soon-to-be husband slowly remembering his surrounds. She screamed out again,
Kiyone: RUN!!
Her voice died down, as she had finally lost the rest of her will to protect her most loved ones.. Tenchi lept to his feet and scooped Yakume into his arms and bolted for the door
Suddenly as her twin tentacles wrap around tenchi.. he lets yakume go..and yells at her to run as fast as she can and as far away she can...
Yakume hesitated for a moment, but fear made her run. With no idea where to go she was running blind. Meanwhile Tenchi shut his eyes to gather courage to look round. When he did he saw Kiyone glaring at him with a sinister grin. Her eyes lost the soft light they once held, replaced by an insane glare. He knew she was enjoying this.
Kiyone: Now where do you think you're going and leaving me here all alone?
Tenchi didn't know how to respond to her now, what was he supposed to say?
Kiyone let out a low growl.
Kiyone: Let's see if you're still quiet when I do this..
Kiyone suddenly yanked her tentacle back, along with Tenchi. She flexed out her other claw causing Tenchi to ram his stomach into it. Tenchi's eyes bolted open gritting his teeth in agony, attempting not to scream. To make matters worse, Kiyone flexed her claws around inside the small wound. Tenchi's breathing become more heavy as he felt like passing out from the intense pain, luckily before the breaking point she pulled her claw back.
Kiyone: I'm sorry... did that hurt? *grins*
Tenchi squirmed looking down at his bleeding stomach. Bloody ran out fast creating a small pool of blood below and since Kiyone was holding him tightly, he couldn't cover it up with his hands.
Tenchi: Atleast I'm buying Yakume s.....ome time...
Kiyone: Don't think I've forgotton about her my dear..
Tenchi: P..please Kiyone, don't do this... i..it's controlling you..
Kiyone took no action to his words, her only responce was tightening her grip around him. Tenchi felt a sickening squelching sound as where Kiyone wounded him tightend. He began to felt weak, she was draining him. He realised oif she did, she'd become stronger
but he couldn't move. Not since he got a gaping wound in his stomach area. Little by little, his Jurian energy seeped out and around onto Kiyone's other wrist and all the while she simply smirked at him. He could feel his consious slipping as she neared draining him all.
Tenchi: No... don't...
The energy gathering around Kiyone's other wrist shot into her torso, creating a rippling effect all over. After she caught her breath, she flinged him to the wall.
Kiyone: *turns looking at him* Thank you my love.
Kiyone grinned wickedly as she watched Tenchi slip away into unconcious. Now for Yakume.
Somewhere not too far Yakume was still running, she stopped noticing a circular hatch into a small ship. She cluthced her bunny plushie and crawled in, the door suddenly slammed shut leaving poor Yakume more frightend.
Computer: Countdown to launch - 20 seconds. Destination - Planet Jurai
Just as the computer reached 5, Kiyone showed up. Upon hearing the countdown comense, she growled rushing towards it. In her left claw she charged up a quick blast to blow open the door. The blast hit dead on with no damage, but the countdown had already reached zero. Yakume screamed in fear as her mother then attempted to slash to the door.
But the pod luckily lauched in time.
Yakume watched as the was parted with both her parents, all on her own. Yakume slumped to the floor, it didn;t take long for her emotions to pour out and cry. She tightly cluthced her bunny plushie with her eyes wide open. As she cried herself to sleep the computer spoke out
Computer: Destiation - U..unkwnown.... *cuts off*
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eerrg I quadriple posted but I had to T_T! No room! More later..
My writting o_O - Grave_Guardian - 27-01-2005
Ahhh Ria uhave started to write as well eh? The story is good yes? It is very good u must keep it up.
My writting o_O - Ria - 27-01-2005
Grave_Guardian Wrote:Ahhh Ria uhave started to write as well eh? The story is good yes? It is very good u must keep it up.
Started? I've been writting for years, took ages to get this good. Thanks kindly for the comment :O
As the pod zoomed off into space, Kiyone stood there scowling with her claws clenched tight. A puny 4 year old child had escaped her by accident. Kiyone wasn't at all pleased, not since she could of easily taken her Jurai power easily. Slowly, her eyes narrowed to a slit - thinking what to do next. She had to keep a low profile if her stealthy plans were to succeed. But she needed to know where the pods went to...
As luck would have it a guard ran from the corridor, he appeared to be a rush and
running for quite a while. He halted a few feet from Kiyone trying to catch his breath before speaking.
Guard: *panting* Ma'am I...
Kiyone; *interupting, in a cold tone* Where do these pods go?
The guard blinked for a few seconds, then answering.
Guard: They uh go to Jurai ma'am.
Kiyone smirked lightly, quite pleased with the answer
Kiyone: How convinient..now... leave me
Guard: Excuse me ma'am but what was the screaming eariler about?
Kiyone let loose a low growl, barley hearable by the guard. Although her temper began to rise, she attempted to keep her cool. Killing the guard would only raise suspision upon Jurai. A slow inhale and breath out was heard to calm herself.
Kiyone: It was merely stomach pains.
Guard: Oh.
Kiyone: *gritting teeth* Now leave!
The guard immediatly stood up right and bowing before returning to his post. Leaving Kiyone to plot..but it suddenely occured to her Tenchi would alert Washu of this when he woke. A sly smirk crossed her face as she looked to her side, knowing it would be far too easy to get rid of Tenchi. Dump him on the old Jurai in the forbiden space.
Kiyone: Perfect..
Kiyone turned gracefully allowing her her to flick up. It didn't take long to return to
Tenchi's postion and still Tenchi was laying in the same position when she left him.
Upon kneeling down beside him, she checked him over for breathing. Still alive.
Kiyone wasted no time in picking him up with both arms. As she walked to the pods she settled him down on the wall. Meanwhile she climbed into a pod and begun to set the co ordrinates, still remembering them after all these years. Once they were imputed, the computer's clock began to count down from 20. Once she was out, she picked Tenchi up by his neck softly and neatly placing him inside the pod. But she suddenely stopped as she was getting out. Instantly she regonised a panel to be the communiaction one. She couldn't have that happening, she needed Tenchi to be missing for as long as possible.
Grinning wickedly, she drew an arm back and launched a straight claw into the panel immediatly destryoing it on impact. Quickly she hopped out as the counter reached zero. As it launched she couldn't help but think of a sinister though...
Kiyone: I guess this mean the wedding's off for now... *grins*
Kiyone then jumped into a pod herself, after pressing a few buttons the pod began it's countdown and all the while Kiyone sat back, her arms crossed looking out into space with a light smile.
Kiyone: I'm coming.... Jurai..
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Tenchi slowly opend his eyes to the point he could see the pitch black sky above. The first thing that came to mind was where was he? His surroundings consisted of an uneven landscape filled with tree stumps to the sides of walkways. He could see no plant life as far as his eye could see, but wait.. he knew this place.. it was all coming back to him now. This was the place where his grandfather resurrected the two knights to help fight Kagato.Kagato.. that was also the name of the man responsable for the symbiote landing on Earth in the future. He gazed up above, his expression filled with sorrow - he rememberd that terrible day too well..
*flashback*
Kiyone in a teasing manner ran a clawed finger around Tenchi's chest, slowly making her way to the corner of his mouth. It pleased her to no greater end to see Tenchi with so much fear. On the recieving end Tenchi tried as hard as he could not to budge an inch, unless he wished for deep slice into his skin.Soon, she stopped and placed her claw around his cheek slowly so Tenchi could feel her claws scrape against his vunerable skin.
Kiyone: Your skin... is so soft yet so easy to pierce into..
She gave a shy grin edging him to speak up despite her claw still wrapped around his cheek.
Tenchi: P..please...... listen to me Kiyone
At that moment she pressed her clawed tips further into his skin. Tenchi immediatly reacted with a quick gasp. his eyes darted around for any signs of blood dripping. None, thank god.
Kiyone: *in a sweet, seductive tone* Perhaps you didn;t hear me the first time, I-don't-listen-to-anyone!
At that moment she put enough force on Tenchi's head to slam him against the tree to which he was tied to hard. He eyes remained shut, his head slumped forward feeling a sense of loss. Is this it?
*end flashback*
Tenchi snapped out of his daydream, that nightmare was embedded in his memory forever. He felt like his world has came to a dead end, he thought for sure that... after the older Kiyone warned them this would never happen. He slumped his head between his knees. He couldn't help but remember something happier, he wasn't sure why at this time.
*flashback*
As Tenchi quietly openend Washu's inter dimensional doorway, he suddenly felt 2 arms cling around his chest and immediatly he knew it was Ryoko.
Ryoko: Tenchi! I missed you!
Tenchi: Ryoko, I'm kind of busy.
Ryoko: Something more important than me? *sulks*
Tenchi squirrmed out of Ryoko's cuddle, turning to face her
Tenchi: I'm just see'ing if Kiyone's check up went ok.
Ryoko raised a brow in confusion
Ryoko: But..
Tenchi: Ryoko I won't be long, don't make a fuss of it ok?
Ryoko said nothing, she simply vanished into thin air leaving Tenchi alone.After giving a short sigh of releif he turned and stepped through awaiting Washu to open another door to where Kiyone was. Right on cue a transparet object became visabl uinfront of him and Washu popped her head out. She doaned a cheeky grin on her face, Tenchi being the slow one to realise anything looked confused.
Tenchi: Er hey Washu, everything go ok?
Washu giggled sweetly giving him an inviting look
Washu: Mmhmm! But there's something you should know.
Tenchi: Oh really wha..!
Before he could finish his sentance Washu grabbed hold of his arm and pulled him in with her. As poor Tenchi got his breath back he stood upright and insantly caught onto Kiyone's odd expression. He could tell on her face she was in shock.
Tenchi: Kiyone? What's wrong? Are you alright?
The first thing that popped into his head was Is she ill? what could it possibly be?
Slowly but surely, Kiyone's eyes perked in the direction of it voice. Byt then her expression showed a little joy to see him. With a long sigh, she plucked up her courage and stood up in an awkad stance.
Kiyone: I..m I'm not sure how to put this..
Kiyone rubbed her arm in a tense way. Washu chuckled to herself before deciding to but in.
Washu: Oh cmon tell him!
Washu reared her flat palm back an gave Kiyone and hard whack on the back causing her to shuffle forwadr a few steps.Kiyone took another sigh and finally spoke
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Kiyone: Uh.. Tenchi I'm.........
Tenchi: Hmm?
Kiyone: I'm pregnant..3 months
Tenchi's eyes suddenely looked as if they were going to explode from the shock! Every second a new thought crept into his buzzing head.
Tenchi: Oh my god.. is she mad at me? What should I say? I'm going to be a dad?!
Kiyone: Tenchi?..
Tenchi: Uh.. I... how, how did you get... pregnant?Kiyone: Remember that night 3 months ago onboard Yagami?
Tenchi's mind suddenely clicked. That was the furthest they went with sex, especially with fewer clothes. Oh god..
Tenchi: I don't belive it..
Kiyone: Uh.. are you mad?
Tenchi: Huh? Of course not, I was thining... you might of been mad at me really..
Tenchi's face quickly turned into a worrisom frown
Kiyone: No... I'm not mad. I suppose in a way I am hiding some happiness away.
Tenchi: You're keping it then?
Kiyone: I can't just kill it...............I..I'm keeping it.
Tenchi nodded slowly, he thought about it for a few seconds.
Tenchi: she's keeping the baby... she's keeping the baby.. Oh my god will she be
alright?
*THUNK*!
Tenchi immediatly passed out after that last thought. As he did, Washu and Kiyone rushed over to his side.
Washu: Man... he's out like a light!
Kiyone: Do you think he took it well?
Washu grinned
Washu: Yeah, he's beyond happy!
*end flashback*
Despite the freezing weather, the warmth he felt from that flashback continued to keep him warm. He snuggled into his arms smiling weakily. But, it quickly faded as his mind finally got back round the the present situation at hand. Yakume was missing and Kiyone was possessed by evil.
Tenchi then forcefully stood up, as bleak as his situation was. He coudn't. he wouldn't let Kiyone go. He made his way into the pod examining what Kiyone did nto break. He scanned the wrekage for anything he could communicate with, then he noticed something under the control panel. Curious, he pressed it. The ember glass quickly shimmerd before glowing brightly.
Computer: Emegancy beakon activated.
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I'm working on my next one now :p
My writting o_O - Kisanzi - 27-01-2005
Yay for Tenchi fanfics! I really enjoyed reading it and I'm left curious as to what is going to happen. I've read a few Tenchi fanfics, but yours is the first where Tenchi gets together with Kiyone. Regardless it's still a great story so far. The only question I have is the whereabouts of the other characters; Ayeka, Ryoko and don't forget my favorites Mihoshi and Washu!
If I failed to mention it earlier, Tenchi Universe is my personal favorite anime of all time and it makes me happy when I read fan-fics that continue in interesting ways and keep a great show alive. Post more when you can please!
My writting o_O - Ria - 27-01-2005
Kisanzi Wrote:Yay for Tenchi fanfics! I really enjoyed reading it and I'm left curious as to what is going to happen. I've read a few Tenchi fanfics, but yours is the first where Tenchi gets together with Kiyone. Regardless it's still a great story so far. The only question I have is the whereabouts of the other characters; Ayeka, Ryoko and don't forget my favorites Mihoshi and Washu!
If I failed to mention it earlier, Tenchi Universe is my personal favorite anime of all time and it makes me happy when I read fan-fics that continue in interesting ways and keep a great show alive. Post more when you can please!
Hehe. About the other characters, as I said this is an RPG - I only handle my 2 characters and a few others. Go to that URL and find the Destany fear section. You'll find others post that tie in with mine. As I give you more you may be left puzzled to the sudden jump in plot. READ the posts from other people to keep up :p
Thanks for the comment! *snuggle*!
Important Edit: THe flashback where Kiynoe tells Tenchi she's pregnant needs work in details. I won't post the update here, but I will on that site's forum. Yakume's character isn't in unknown space anymore, read other people's post at that site! :p