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Chaos, The Fallen One - Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005
Pioneer2Log#13...
I am starting this journal to record my story. I was onboard Pioneer1. I am the only survivor of the strange explosion. My parents are dead. My friends are dead. The government keeps me in the hunters' district. They gave me a licensce. Section ID: Redria. Class Type: HUmar. Level: 158.
Enough formal stuff. I was found huddled up in the corner of the forest. A pack of savage wolves came and guarded me. I was found by a group of hunters. They brought me onboard this ship. I was told by the principle that as I was being medically treated I kept screaming "The Darkness!" I have no Idea what this means now, but something terrified me. We must leave Ragol now.
End Log...
Pioneer2Log#13
My name... I do not know my name. But on this strange weapon I was found with was printed the word: Chaos. The weapon is a large sword type weapon... I call myself Chaos after the seal on that strange black sword...
Someone, please help me. I must know the truth. I am going into those strange ruins. I must find why I fear the darkness so much... The medical examiner is coming. She's nice(beautiful) I hope our friendship grows.
End Log...
Chaos, The Fallen One - Lee Xao Vue - 09-07-2005
thats really short should add on to it bro but otherwise i think its ok
Chaos, The Fallen One - Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005
I plan to make more chapters, BRO!
Chaos, The Fallen One - Anti Hacker - 09-07-2005
Really good, I love the way you have used logs like a kind of diary entry, many famous noves use this technique (The woman in white, cure you english lit!)
I think this could go really well, try to research some wider vocabulary and you have it in the bag.
Chaos, The Fallen One - Querytansytt - 09-07-2005
your talented
Chaos, The Fallen One - Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005
Chaos, The Fallen One V.2 is coming soon. (soon as I get around to doing it)