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Well..yes..if you have checked out my personal profile..you would have noticed that it says Student/Ficton writer...and I am curently writing..my first book..and if I get a few people who would liek to hear my idea..as well...hear a few pages now and again...I would be more then happy to oblige.
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Your sig is too big.........
you should have like an 8 line maximum.
But no, no one has read your profile. Very rarely does anyone, read anothers profile. But I would like to hear your Ideas. I will request a mod move this. This should be in fan-ficcie area.
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Yes yes please do post your story, everyone likes to hear/read stories. So do not delay.
Read forum rules.
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(I will post a discription first...and it may seem a little similar to PSO)
its a future kind of setting,forest covers most of this planet,a little water,not much,and mythical monsters are around the world,in the forests.Citys are made,and defened by people.Wepons that can be used,are like,swords and things like that.It basicaly a midevil style wepons,and armor,but with modern living condisions.The people who kill monsters for money,are called Hunters,they get Jobs,like hunting a person,or monster for money.As well,another race is living amoung humans.Talas,They are basically what would happen if a mage and a elf had a baby,pointy ears,good fighteres,and good with magic.Another race are Dragoons,like half dragon,half human,great fighters,better then anyone else.The Dragoons are taller,and more well built...and have dragon like wings.Depending on Scale colour,that shows what kind of magic...EG..Red=Fire,Black=Shadow,White=Heal,Gray=Stone...
the story would start off..in a small city,in a 16 year old boy's dream...and thats the intro to the first chapter..
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You have a rough grasp of your story, but for a student writer...........it sounds kinda' plain.
Read Kisanzi's and my fan-fics. He is really good at stories, he critiqued mine and told me it was excellent. Also read some of the other newer ones.
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its...plain...I have told other people..they have said its a wonderfully creative idea.......but..plain.....never heard that.........now..I'm to..confused..and..a little...ticked off..to really continue writing it right now....
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Ark Wrote:its...plain...I have told other people..they have said its a wonderfully creative idea.......but..plain.....never heard that.........now..I'm to..confused..and..a little...ticked off..to really continue writing it right now....
Hey buddy, don't get mad now. Cheer up.
I meant it was kinda' plain for these types of boards. With the future sci-fi aspect we don't get many others. What will seperate yours from the rest, if in fact that is what you do, will be to create really multilayed characters. You want them to be complex but no bipolar. And have a good story arch, always important also.
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