Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff

[Kitsadoodles]

Wow guys, your stuff is all amazing! keep posting, i really look forward to seeing more. you guys are really talented, keep it up!

[nomercy]

I can answer that one,Yoshi.It was in a folder which was stored on our old PC hard drive which i now use in my laptop as a slave drive.The links,as well as the pictures were all stored there.

Not sure what will happen next as regards PSO ep III,as i have a bad case of mental block at the moment.

[Rena]

She lay still
In a golden field
Surrounded by enemies
He was her shield

One,two,three struck down
And he had hardly moved
Four,five,six on the ground
His vow was not yet proved

But still the battle raged
They all attacked him,swords in hand
Fighting like animals caged
He cut them down,they fell like sand


Wow,i can write poems too!

[Kitsadoodles]

Nice poem Rena! kind of scary and suspenseful in my opinion, which makes it an amazing poem. you guys are both great poets!

[Lee-yoshi]

A whole family full of poets?!
Guess it's a bit cliche to say '& they didnt even know it'

[Rena]

I was waiting for someone to say that.

The bard sat against the tree
And sang of times gone by
Of times when wars were fought with swords
And spears everywhere the eye could see

Now,in this world so strange
A different battle goes on
Wars are fought with guns and bombs
Of which have larger range

'A savior will come some day'they said
Ha,they know nothing of this life
They say he will come
And to freedom we shall be led

It must ache their hearts so much so
When the almighty Gods let them down
To abandon them without aid
Their shepherds have let them go

Could not humans get along
To live with fellow man
In this world you will die
By putting one step wrong


Sorry if this offends any religious people here.

[Talim009]

The poems ive read are very good and i can see the picture and hear the sounds. Your art has moved and the words as well.
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I can make you feel pain just by speaking words that will turn you cold.

[Kitsadoodles]

I like the new poem Rena. its the truth, sadly, which makes it so much more interesting and fun to read and think about. also, the rhyming pattern is very new with this poem, which i love.

[Rena]

Ha ha,back in high school i was told that my poems and stories were completely rubbish by the teachers.

[Lee-yoshi]

Fools, they're all fools... damn teachers