08-03-2005, 07:27 PM
I can see how you've vastly improved your style comparing this to your other fic. But I'm a huge sucker for narratives, so I actually like the flow of this one a lot. Are you ever going to finish this? Because I was just curious as to what you were planning when you wrote it.
PSU Character:
Izurei - Level 50 Cast, Rank 10 Ranger/Rank 3 Force (Future Guntecher) - Universe 2 or 15
Izurei - Level 50 Cast, Rank 10 Ranger/Rank 3 Force (Future Guntecher) - Universe 2 or 15