25-03-2005, 08:34 PM
You have a rough grasp of your story, but for a student writer...........it sounds kinda' plain.
Read Kisanzi's and my fan-fics. He is really good at stories, he critiqued mine and told me it was excellent. Also read some of the other newer ones.
Read Kisanzi's and my fan-fics. He is really good at stories, he critiqued mine and told me it was excellent. Also read some of the other newer ones.
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