14-04-2005, 11:30 PM
Beautifully done. I like the raw emotion; you can really feel it in each line. Powerful words and images. The line:
"The stale wind to carry my plight
Through the canyons of my mind, so thin"
was amazing, easily in my opinion the most powerful words of them poem, kinda bring the rest of it together. Really nice work, I look forward to maybe seeing more of your poetry?
"The stale wind to carry my plight
Through the canyons of my mind, so thin"
was amazing, easily in my opinion the most powerful words of them poem, kinda bring the rest of it together. Really nice work, I look forward to maybe seeing more of your poetry?
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"You know you can't stop me but you continue to try all the same. That's whats so appealing about you..."