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Fanfic: Discovering The Great Shadow
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Edit: 11 May 2007. The italics are so messed up here, I think you should just go read it on fanfiction.net here.

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Prologue to Episode III. Attempts to follow canon. Genre: Adventure.
Break x Sophia.

Appendix (yes, at the start!): Disclaimer and rants:

PSO belongs to Sega, Sonic Team. This fanfic uses their ideas.

I have tried to make this as 'factual' as possible.

I have no idea how organisations work in real life. I just made these up, so I'm sorry if they don't seem very realistic.

I know that in real life, a vaccine is very different from an antidote. Never mind!

I know they should have MAGs, but there was no mention of it in the game, and I wasn't creative enough, so I didn't put them in. 8_8

I apologise in advance for any other plot holes, grammatical errors, typos and bad word usage. Please point all of them out to me. Constructive criticism is encouraged. Thanks for reading.

==Chapters 1-3==

Chapter 1: Sophia.

Sophia looked out of her office through the rain beating on the windows. What’s taking so long? She pushed her research papers to one side and impatiently drummed her fingers on her desk as the BEE system made a happy click. Finally! Now, it’s home time. She fumbled around her messy drawers and found her mobile phone.

Ring r—
The receiver was quickly picked up at the other side.
“Hello!” responded an enthusiastic voice. It was her little sister.
“Oh, I’m so glad you’re home already. Could you check if there are any more Telepipes in my blue bag in the Study room…”
“There is. I’ve already checked,” she lied, and gave a little chuckle, “I’ll throw one immediately! Bye!” Laughing was heard in the background.
The receiver was put down as quickly as possible without sounding rude.

==

Chapter 2: Ryuker!

“Doesn’t your sister mind you looking through her stuff?” asks an amused human girl in a long, elaborate orange dress. She was a FOmarl.

“Maybe, but it’s for her own safety. I really don’t trust her boyfriend much.” The young, tanned HUnewearl wondered whether or not to tell her friend what she had seen in Sophia’s bag. Curiosity got the better of her when she was tidying up, and she had found carefully packed blankets, emergency food and survival kit stuff in the bag, as if Sophia was going to leave to go on a dangerous quest, or maybe even elope for a few days, heaven knows why. She pushed the thought aside for now.

“Break? I’ve actually met him before, long ago, at the Hunters’ guild...”

“Yes, him. I only joined Big Sister’s organisation last week, and guess what? He’s there, teaching some ‘Miyama Sword Technique’ that he modified himself. He’s so aloof sometimes, it scares me. Don’t you know that he was partly responsible for thousands of peoples’ lives? Mind you, if anything happens to my sister …” She clenched her fists, then shrugged.

“… That was when I just met Kranz,” The FOmarl blushed, completely ignoring the HUnewearl for the moment. “Oh, poor Kranz, he’s so lonely because his dad Blitz is hardly ever home nowadays… Hey, what are you doing?”

She watched as Sil’fer walked to the centre of the room and mimes a spell-casting pose. “Let me show you my newest Technique.”

“Ryuker!” Magical light rays converged into her hand, and then dropped to the floor, but that was all.

==

Chapter 3: News.

The Hunters’ guild was not busy today, nor has it been for years. A tall FOmar in dark blue robes was there collecting his newly printed BEE message, a letter from Blitz, marked URGENT.

“As you are indeed an apprentice of Miyama, it has been agreed that … this is top secret stuff,” he nodded to himself. He scanned the rest of the letter, focusing on the words Sophia and tomorrow, and patted his Pinkal Section-ID badge on his chest. “What a surprise. This is great news. You shouldn’t always be so pessimistic, Break! Of course it was going to get the O.K.”

He caught the Hunters’-guild woman’s eye and quickly walked away, suddenly aware of his bad habit of talking to himself.

“Miyama…” he thought out loud, as soon as he was out of her earshot, “I wish they wouldn’t mention that name. Working for the Government has been my biggest regret yet, but it probably isn’t all Miyama fault... He was suddenly restruck by guilt as he remembered the recent OPSS incident, the mass massacre of Humanoids. He took a deep breath.

“Well. Tomorrow, I’ll be switching to Sophia’s sector--Research. I’m going to call her right now.”

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| Mirinee | FOmarl | PURPLENUM | Green Robes | Level 190 | PSOBB Skyline 1 | [Image: ArkzB.gif]
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Fanfic: Discovering The Great Shadow - by Mirinee - 08-06-2005, 08:17 PM
Fanfic: Discovering The Great Shadow - by Mirinee - 08-06-2005, 10:37 PM
Fanfic: Discovering The Great Shadow - by Mirinee - 08-06-2005, 10:39 PM
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