18-12-2003, 11:02 AM
Heh heh. I have nearly finished the first chapter in my fanfic. Tell me what you think about it. Hyozanryu and mini Bert are in the first chapter, consider yourselfs lucky!
PROLOUGE.
In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, the seabed research center.
Hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...
But, Olga was defeated by the powers of Kireek,an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab, and the military...boy that was a mistake. The military was investigating the mines under the central dome with the asistance of Jean Carlo Montague and his two emotional robots, Elenor and Ult. He helped in bio-weaponary and the unsual density in the photons. But the rest of ragol was sealed of by the military. The council seem to have no control anymore...what will become of this planet of Ragol...
Chapter One: The 'hidden' lab?
On Pioneer 2, the hunters, forces, and rangers were pratically ended.
With Ragol out of order and the hunters guilds temporary 'unavailable'. Hunters were bored...
But one Hunter was about to change that...
Hyozanryu: Hey, mini bert. What are we going to do today?
Mini Bert: How should I know? Do you have an idea?
Hyozanryu: Yeah, see that guard over there? *Points to the transporter
to Island De Gal La VaL, where the guard is snoring* Grab your armor,
were going to ragol!
Mini bert: *Stands* Are you crazy what if we...
Hyozanryu: We won't, have had this planned out. I planted a Nar lilly's
poisonous mucus in his drink *Chuckles and reaches for his Stag Cutlery*
Come on. Its now or never...
Mini Bert: Well. Lets go.
Both of them sneak past the snoring guard and get transported to the seabeds...
Apon arrival, they both drew there weapons, Hyozanryu using his Stag Cutlery, and Mini Bert, equipping the Heavens Punisher [AN: I'm too kind...damn...]. They go into the first room. But the other door was open, they ran to it but then hid behind a wall. Two Rangers were talking, they, both fully equipped with Egg Blasters.
Mini Bert: *Wispering* What the hell are they doing here. I guess they're bored like us...
Hoyzinyu: No, listen. they are talking serious.
???: Hmph, where is it? The 'hidden' lab was supposed to be in this room. I just don't get it. They said these co-ordinates...
?????: Hey, lets go on further. We might find something on ahead
Hyozanryu: * Stands after he can't hear the guards* ??? What was that about?
Mini Bert: Who knows. Lets have a look for this lab. I want to find it.
I'm guessing those guys were employed by the military.
Hyozanryu: Yep, I think you maybe right there Bert.
Mini Bert: HEY! It's Mini Bert!
Hyozanryu: Okay. Sorry. * Says inside his head* Lol...
Mini Bert: Lets search the room.
Both of them started to look around, banging walls and climbing things.After an hour of searching they sat down.
Hyozanryu hears a sound coming from the wall. He stands. Then he runs to the other side of the room and charges towards the door...* BANG! *
Mini Bert: Hey, what are you doing?
Hyozanryu: * Attacking it with his Stag Cutlery * Hey. I heard some computer sounds. I...have...to...see...HAAAAAAHHH!!!!
Hyozanryu casts Rabarta on the wall. It freezes it, then he charges at it and breaks the wall falling down into some water * SPLASH! He gets up and wipes the water off him*.
Thats as far as I got last night, I'll add the rest of it on soon.
PROLOUGE.
In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, the seabed research center.
Hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...
But, Olga was defeated by the powers of Kireek,an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab, and the military...boy that was a mistake. The military was investigating the mines under the central dome with the asistance of Jean Carlo Montague and his two emotional robots, Elenor and Ult. He helped in bio-weaponary and the unsual density in the photons. But the rest of ragol was sealed of by the military. The council seem to have no control anymore...what will become of this planet of Ragol...
Chapter One: The 'hidden' lab?
On Pioneer 2, the hunters, forces, and rangers were pratically ended.
With Ragol out of order and the hunters guilds temporary 'unavailable'. Hunters were bored...
But one Hunter was about to change that...
Hyozanryu: Hey, mini bert. What are we going to do today?
Mini Bert: How should I know? Do you have an idea?
Hyozanryu: Yeah, see that guard over there? *Points to the transporter
to Island De Gal La VaL, where the guard is snoring* Grab your armor,
were going to ragol!
Mini bert: *Stands* Are you crazy what if we...
Hyozanryu: We won't, have had this planned out. I planted a Nar lilly's
poisonous mucus in his drink *Chuckles and reaches for his Stag Cutlery*
Come on. Its now or never...
Mini Bert: Well. Lets go.
Both of them sneak past the snoring guard and get transported to the seabeds...
Apon arrival, they both drew there weapons, Hyozanryu using his Stag Cutlery, and Mini Bert, equipping the Heavens Punisher [AN: I'm too kind...damn...]. They go into the first room. But the other door was open, they ran to it but then hid behind a wall. Two Rangers were talking, they, both fully equipped with Egg Blasters.
Mini Bert: *Wispering* What the hell are they doing here. I guess they're bored like us...
Hoyzinyu: No, listen. they are talking serious.
???: Hmph, where is it? The 'hidden' lab was supposed to be in this room. I just don't get it. They said these co-ordinates...
?????: Hey, lets go on further. We might find something on ahead
Hyozanryu: * Stands after he can't hear the guards* ??? What was that about?
Mini Bert: Who knows. Lets have a look for this lab. I want to find it.
I'm guessing those guys were employed by the military.
Hyozanryu: Yep, I think you maybe right there Bert.
Mini Bert: HEY! It's Mini Bert!
Hyozanryu: Okay. Sorry. * Says inside his head* Lol...
Mini Bert: Lets search the room.
Both of them started to look around, banging walls and climbing things.After an hour of searching they sat down.
Hyozanryu hears a sound coming from the wall. He stands. Then he runs to the other side of the room and charges towards the door...* BANG! *
Mini Bert: Hey, what are you doing?
Hyozanryu: * Attacking it with his Stag Cutlery * Hey. I heard some computer sounds. I...have...to...see...HAAAAAAHHH!!!!
Hyozanryu casts Rabarta on the wall. It freezes it, then he charges at it and breaks the wall falling down into some water * SPLASH! He gets up and wipes the water off him*.
Thats as far as I got last night, I'll add the rest of it on soon.
I'm dead