19-12-2003, 07:51 PM
heh heh. I have remodeled the prolouge and have shotened the first chapter, the hidden lab is now the second chapter.
PROLOUGE.
In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, a solitary island with lush cliffs and a huge mountain. Also a vast jungle. But there was hidden secrets to this island...A seabed research center...
This labatory was underneath the island. Near the central control area.The labatory housed famous scientists, docter Grave, docter Otso and there teams were working on project Olga. The docters came up with an AI Program so they could record observations from there experiments...
After the huge explosion, a research team was dispatched to find out what happened...they were never heard from again...
A month afterwards, the experiments were reacting to something. The scientists belived it was the density of the abnormal photons...
One week later hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...
All but one survived...clawing its way into the waste disposal center...
But, Olga, the mutated entity, that was found by two hunters, Kireek and Isaac. Olga was defeated by these two hunters. Now famous, but the powers of Kireek, an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab and the military...boy that was a mistake...
The military soon began to take control of the 'pioneer project', the areas of Ragol were sealed off. The military began to investigate the central dome. They set up camp down there. Some High-rank hunters were asked to help with monster control. One of these was a ranger known as
Gala. Another known as Vahn [AN: Names taken from Legend of Legaia for PSone, a great game. I could never get a copy...damn...], a damn good hunter wielding a Dundral. They just fended off weak enemies for a high amount of pay. They were also instructed to eliminate any hunters that came down to Ragol with no exceptions...
Deep down in the ruins, the research teams were protected by some S-Rank Hunters. Such as Deadman, War and Farore [AN: My old DC characters].
And there were female forces helping out with curation of sickness a general A** Kicking against death Gunners. These were Alicia, Sakura and many others. There ultimate goal was to protect one scientist. He is young, but he is a genius in bio-weaponary and was mainly researching the density of
the abnormal photons. With his two hand-crafted robots testing out his prototype weapons. They were called Ult and Elenor. Elenor, being the older out of the two, was more obidient. Ult on the otherhand, had the tendency to wander off...
With these things going on, and the research of Island De Gal Le Val. Hunters have limited action. The Hunters Guilds were now unavailable.
Hunters, Rangers and Forces had nothing to do. One hunter was about to bend the rules, but does he know what is going to happen to him later that day...
Chapter One: The plan.
The catering areas of Pioneer Two were pretty full to the brim with Hunters, Rangers and Forces. With lots of money to burn...(Due to the fact of not having to buy healing items anymore...) they tend to waste it on eating, clothing, weapons they can't use. Within these boundaries The Forces were coping with it more. As they could just improve there mental strength by meditation, meaning there was no reason to train.Hunters, who really needed to practice, couldn't. The military took over the VR system in the lab and trained it's army in there...
This is where this story[AN: I mean fanfic...] starts...
Hyozanryu, a tall hunter. With a Dark blue costume, a Stag Cutlery and red spiky hair to boot, he was pretty cool looking person (Being in all the womens magazines and all...).
Mini Bert. At an Average hieght. Doned in a Purple/Green Costume, with long green hair. He equips a Spread Needle [AN: Was gonna be a Heavens Punisher, but he told me he prefers
rifles]. Both of them were a force to be reckoned with...a month ago, that is...
They both decided to meet up just outside of the Hospital near the labs to have a get together. Hyozanryu arrived first, he walked down and took a seat on one of the hovering chairs. Mini Bert came walking down the stairs [AN: I know it's a slope, but stairs sound better] and pulled up a chair. Hyozanryu looked pretty mythed...
Hyozanryu: Hey...you're late!
Mini Bert: I know, I know. I was held up by some issues with some girls.
Hyozanryu: Thats cool, I can...
Mini Bert: THEY were looking for you...
Hyozanryu: Sorry, but I have fans. Too many. Thanks for losing them, some of them seemed possessed. I was chased over half of Pioneer Two the other day, it keeps me active though.
Mini Bert: Now you're bragging Hyozanryu.
Hyozanryu: Okay! Calm it. It meant no offense you know...I'm sorry...ANYWAY! I have to tell you why I asked you to come here. Did you bring your Spread?
Mini Bert: Yep, go on then, tell me what you have to say then...* Gets a pillow ready *
Hyozanryu: Right, basically, to put it simply. We are going down to Ragol.
Mini Bert: Are you nuts! No way!
Hyozanryu: Just hear me out. Basically, we will go to the seabed research center for a bit of training. Since the Top of De Gal La Val is occupied with the military. I heard they're starting the seabed in a couple of weeks time. The transporter is guarded by a single guard. This guard is currently asleep for five hours. I put a Nar Lillies poison spit but diluted it thanks to the help of Alicia at the research center for how to do it. We will sneak into the transporter. Go down to the Seabed and look for the waste disposal area.
Mini Bert: What will we do there?
Hyozanryu: We will set several Gigan Bombs there and give it a half an hour countdown. Then we get to the transporter, get out here. The Island goes and so does the militaries commander, Leo,
goes with the island letting us get back to normality when this settles down...we can train again!
Mini Bert: This sounds like another atempt to get to destroy the military. How are we gonna get down there without being noticed? There are bound to be other guards.
Hyozanryu: Didn't you hear what I just said? There's only one guard, err guarding the actual transporter. I gave him a drink. We are all set to go
Mini Bert: ...and what if we fail?
Hyozanryu: Well, were, well. Dead.
Mini Bert: Let me think about it first.
Hyozanryu: We don't have time to do that! We ether go now, or never. Tag along if you want, but I'm going...
Hyozanryu gets up and puts his chair away. He then leaves to go to the lab, he didn't even gesture to Mini Bert. Mini Bert didn't want to die, but, he had nothing to do and it was likely they would be never allowed the same freedom again. He had no idea what to do. He could either:
-Go with Hyozanryu and risk his life to save the world or...
-Stay here feeling guilty on what he has done.
Mini Bert decides to stay, he would prefer to live a life of a coward.
Hyozanryu sneaks around to transporter, the guard is still asleep. He then enters the transporter very quietly...not trying wake the guard...he then pressed the button, hoping that the guard will not wake up...if the guard did well, he would be killed on the spot. He re-configured the settings for a slower transportation, not as much noise as the normal one. He was now on his way to Ragol...
little did he know that he know that he would be involved in saving the universe...
...well thats it for now, don't worry Mini Bert, you're in it later on.
Tell me if it's any better!
PROLOUGE.
In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, a solitary island with lush cliffs and a huge mountain. Also a vast jungle. But there was hidden secrets to this island...A seabed research center...
This labatory was underneath the island. Near the central control area.The labatory housed famous scientists, docter Grave, docter Otso and there teams were working on project Olga. The docters came up with an AI Program so they could record observations from there experiments...
After the huge explosion, a research team was dispatched to find out what happened...they were never heard from again...
A month afterwards, the experiments were reacting to something. The scientists belived it was the density of the abnormal photons...
One week later hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...
All but one survived...clawing its way into the waste disposal center...
But, Olga, the mutated entity, that was found by two hunters, Kireek and Isaac. Olga was defeated by these two hunters. Now famous, but the powers of Kireek, an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab and the military...boy that was a mistake...
The military soon began to take control of the 'pioneer project', the areas of Ragol were sealed off. The military began to investigate the central dome. They set up camp down there. Some High-rank hunters were asked to help with monster control. One of these was a ranger known as
Gala. Another known as Vahn [AN: Names taken from Legend of Legaia for PSone, a great game. I could never get a copy...damn...], a damn good hunter wielding a Dundral. They just fended off weak enemies for a high amount of pay. They were also instructed to eliminate any hunters that came down to Ragol with no exceptions...
Deep down in the ruins, the research teams were protected by some S-Rank Hunters. Such as Deadman, War and Farore [AN: My old DC characters].
And there were female forces helping out with curation of sickness a general A** Kicking against death Gunners. These were Alicia, Sakura and many others. There ultimate goal was to protect one scientist. He is young, but he is a genius in bio-weaponary and was mainly researching the density of
the abnormal photons. With his two hand-crafted robots testing out his prototype weapons. They were called Ult and Elenor. Elenor, being the older out of the two, was more obidient. Ult on the otherhand, had the tendency to wander off...
With these things going on, and the research of Island De Gal Le Val. Hunters have limited action. The Hunters Guilds were now unavailable.
Hunters, Rangers and Forces had nothing to do. One hunter was about to bend the rules, but does he know what is going to happen to him later that day...
Chapter One: The plan.
The catering areas of Pioneer Two were pretty full to the brim with Hunters, Rangers and Forces. With lots of money to burn...(Due to the fact of not having to buy healing items anymore...) they tend to waste it on eating, clothing, weapons they can't use. Within these boundaries The Forces were coping with it more. As they could just improve there mental strength by meditation, meaning there was no reason to train.Hunters, who really needed to practice, couldn't. The military took over the VR system in the lab and trained it's army in there...
This is where this story[AN: I mean fanfic...] starts...
Hyozanryu, a tall hunter. With a Dark blue costume, a Stag Cutlery and red spiky hair to boot, he was pretty cool looking person (Being in all the womens magazines and all...).
Mini Bert. At an Average hieght. Doned in a Purple/Green Costume, with long green hair. He equips a Spread Needle [AN: Was gonna be a Heavens Punisher, but he told me he prefers
rifles]. Both of them were a force to be reckoned with...a month ago, that is...
They both decided to meet up just outside of the Hospital near the labs to have a get together. Hyozanryu arrived first, he walked down and took a seat on one of the hovering chairs. Mini Bert came walking down the stairs [AN: I know it's a slope, but stairs sound better] and pulled up a chair. Hyozanryu looked pretty mythed...
Hyozanryu: Hey...you're late!
Mini Bert: I know, I know. I was held up by some issues with some girls.
Hyozanryu: Thats cool, I can...
Mini Bert: THEY were looking for you...
Hyozanryu: Sorry, but I have fans. Too many. Thanks for losing them, some of them seemed possessed. I was chased over half of Pioneer Two the other day, it keeps me active though.
Mini Bert: Now you're bragging Hyozanryu.
Hyozanryu: Okay! Calm it. It meant no offense you know...I'm sorry...ANYWAY! I have to tell you why I asked you to come here. Did you bring your Spread?
Mini Bert: Yep, go on then, tell me what you have to say then...* Gets a pillow ready *
Hyozanryu: Right, basically, to put it simply. We are going down to Ragol.
Mini Bert: Are you nuts! No way!
Hyozanryu: Just hear me out. Basically, we will go to the seabed research center for a bit of training. Since the Top of De Gal La Val is occupied with the military. I heard they're starting the seabed in a couple of weeks time. The transporter is guarded by a single guard. This guard is currently asleep for five hours. I put a Nar Lillies poison spit but diluted it thanks to the help of Alicia at the research center for how to do it. We will sneak into the transporter. Go down to the Seabed and look for the waste disposal area.
Mini Bert: What will we do there?
Hyozanryu: We will set several Gigan Bombs there and give it a half an hour countdown. Then we get to the transporter, get out here. The Island goes and so does the militaries commander, Leo,
goes with the island letting us get back to normality when this settles down...we can train again!
Mini Bert: This sounds like another atempt to get to destroy the military. How are we gonna get down there without being noticed? There are bound to be other guards.
Hyozanryu: Didn't you hear what I just said? There's only one guard, err guarding the actual transporter. I gave him a drink. We are all set to go
Mini Bert: ...and what if we fail?
Hyozanryu: Well, were, well. Dead.
Mini Bert: Let me think about it first.
Hyozanryu: We don't have time to do that! We ether go now, or never. Tag along if you want, but I'm going...
Hyozanryu gets up and puts his chair away. He then leaves to go to the lab, he didn't even gesture to Mini Bert. Mini Bert didn't want to die, but, he had nothing to do and it was likely they would be never allowed the same freedom again. He had no idea what to do. He could either:
-Go with Hyozanryu and risk his life to save the world or...
-Stay here feeling guilty on what he has done.
Mini Bert decides to stay, he would prefer to live a life of a coward.
Hyozanryu sneaks around to transporter, the guard is still asleep. He then enters the transporter very quietly...not trying wake the guard...he then pressed the button, hoping that the guard will not wake up...if the guard did well, he would be killed on the spot. He re-configured the settings for a slower transportation, not as much noise as the normal one. He was now on his way to Ragol...
little did he know that he know that he would be involved in saving the universe...
...well thats it for now, don't worry Mini Bert, you're in it later on.
Tell me if it's any better!
I'm dead