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The Story of Coral
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07-07-2005, 06:20 AM
your story is interesting so far. But it seems heavily dialogue driven. That's good..but showing their thoughts and actions is important as well, because it helps us, the readers understand your lovely characters better ^^
![[Image: Untitled-1.png]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v251/SilverFoxglove/Signatures%20and%20Avatars/Old%20Signatures/Untitled-1.png) "You know you can't stop me but you continue to try all the same. That's whats so appealing about you..." |
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The Story of Coral - by Infinite8 - 10-06-2005, 01:01 AM
The Story of Coral - by Infinite8 - 11-06-2005, 11:20 PM
The Story of Coral - by Infinite8 - 07-07-2005, 05:01 AM
The Story of Coral - by Karasu Murder - 07-07-2005, 06:20 AM
The Story of Coral - by Infinite8 - 10-07-2005, 04:58 PM
The Story of Coral - by Karasu Murder - 10-07-2005, 06:05 PM
The Story of Coral - by Anti Hacker - 10-07-2005, 09:27 PM
The Story of Coral - by Infinite8 - 14-12-2005, 05:56 PM
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