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err right. Well from now on please give me serious comments about the lyrics i write ok?

So for the next song:

Friends for bullets, girls for guns, I've been shot in the heart.
Can't live much longer, but I think I'll hold on.
Just remember, it's not the gun or the bullet that's killing me.
The two being together caused this wound.

Like slow-motion i watched it coming towards me,
slowly spinning through the air, could have dodged it.
Nevermind what could have been, i let it hit me straight.
No one to talk to, no doctors to remove the bullet.
So it sits inside me everyday, infecting and burning at me.
You sit there smiling, don't even know you've gotten away with murder.
If you're ever alone just say my name and I'll rise again and come to your side.
Because the one that killed me is the one I long to be with.

Clinging on, to the life I love to live.
Everyday I'm not with you I die once more.
But if I wasn't such a fool I would have dodged the bullet.
Sent by you, not meant to harm me.
Accidents happen! it's ok. It's not like you knew this would happen.

I was too quiet, didn't open up to you, so now I've got this open wound.
Sew me up, fast, with the thread of your love.
This will leave a scar but it will remind me,
to be fast enough to become your bullet to someone else.