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Rate these lyrics.
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01-02-2006, 01:45 AM
You have potential. But your lyrics make me want to kill myself.(trust me plenty of people already want to do that for me) You should work on rhyme scheme. Perhaps try to accent the words of the song differently. Add more of an inhanced vocabulary as well. Keep trying though. Remember: Succeeding is firing one more time at your enemy than your enemy fires at you.
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[COLOR="Purple"]How the storm it fulfills, My heart though unhealed, Celestial knives ebonied' And wild woods thrill Yet far fiercer still Her lustre eviscerates me...
I am HE the crowned and conquering Darkness...[/COLOR]
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Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 25-11-2005, 06:38 AM
Rate these lyrics. - by Deathbringer - 25-11-2005, 01:45 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by adrina_kellers - 25-11-2005, 02:18 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 25-11-2005, 08:55 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Shadamoo - 25-11-2005, 09:58 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 25-11-2005, 11:22 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Twin Dante - 26-11-2005, 03:45 AM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 30-11-2005, 09:18 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Serpent7 - 01-12-2005, 07:27 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by sesshoumaru - 01-12-2005, 10:45 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Cye Zero - 02-12-2005, 10:37 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 08-12-2005, 12:11 AM
Rate these lyrics. - by someone - 20-12-2005, 09:41 AM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 20-12-2005, 09:13 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Shadamoo - 24-12-2005, 09:54 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by MarioVet - 01-01-2006, 10:26 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Jimbo1990 - 02-01-2006, 06:40 PM
Rate these lyrics. - by Sephiroth Now - 01-02-2006, 01:45 AM
Rate these lyrics. - by N1NJ4 - 02-02-2006, 10:31 PM

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