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My first Fanfic
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ehem i apologize for my long absence but the next chapter is complete and i will upload it tomorrow becuz i wrote it on paper and know i must type it up again so tommorrow my fic continues after like a 6 month delay. lol and im over the girli fell in love with becuz now i go out with jackie and im starting to fall for her even though shes 2 years older than me lol

Chapter 9:The rebirth of Zero the Angel of Darkness
*Everyone just sits there staring at Zero and are frozen for fear.* "Bah enough of this!!!" *Yells DM and Grave as they charge at Zero striking his armor over and over again only to find that not even a scratch was left on the shining black armor.* " Fools you cannot get past this armor even if you all were to attack me nothing would happen!!!" *Lila and Lilka then start chanting a spell they slowly fade away and woman appears from where they stood.* "I am Brooke. I am the one that Iori saved 10 years ago and ive looked up to him as a brother and i will not allow you to destroy him!!" *Brooke then looks at Zero and charges him striking him in the chest piercing the armor hitting zero causing him to groan in pain.* "Damn how did you do that?!?! You will not defeat me so easily!!!!" *Zero then pulls his sword the Grave Shifter out of the ground and swings it at Ria hitting her arm and breaking it. He then roundhouse kicks Keiji knocking him to the ground. He then jumps up in the air and comes down on Nex almost killing him on contact.*Ria then begins to shout orders* "Everyone pull back, we cant afford to take another attack of this magnitude again as he almost killed us all with one attack!" *Ria, Nex, Keiji, start retreating while brooke picks up kelianns corpse and DM and Grave hold Zero at bay* *meanwhile in some dimension Iori wakes up to see a distorted world which is Zero' past and his put together* "Ahhh what the hell happened to me...better yet where the hell am I?" *Says Iori as he looks around the distorted world. Iori then gets up and sees someone or something approach him.* "Who the hell....Ivan i....is that you??? But I saw you die.." *Ivan then dash at iori kicking him in the face and then punching him in the chest causing him to stagger back. Iori then swings at ivan to see him change shapes.* "Iori I am the shapeshifter known as G and I am the one who decides your fate from here on but first you must defeat me and two of my best soldiersknown as Ahira the master swordsman and Zero the dualblade master." *Ashira and Zero then charge at Iori striking him in the chest and legs knocking him to the ground with exetreme force. Iori gos to get up just to be attacked again and again.* "Whats wrong Iori do you need a little motivation??" *asks G as he turns in to Keliann and begins yelling at Iori* "Your not her she would never say that to me!!!!" *Iori then powers up and charges at Zero ripping through his flesh and then tears Ashira into pieces and looks over at G.* "You scared yet?!?!!"*G then replies with laughter "Fool look again they are perfectly fine. I think i should let you know you cant hurt us but seeing how you choose to fight back against your most loved one keliann you have passed the first step and we've decided to help you but you must complete a set of tasks before you can regain your body. Come now Ashira and Zero we must guide Iori through this little quest he must take on." *Iori then looks at G, Ashira, and Zero ang luaghs* Did i scare you so much you decided to help me....pathetic." *G looks at Iori with a stern look* "Iori i dont think you know this yet but zero has been revived, keliann has been killed by you, lila and lilka fused together to form brooke again, ciel has zero under her control and yours friend were almost wiped out with one blow. Keiji, Ria, and Nex are almost dead DM and grave are putting up a good fight but cant hold out to much longer without reinforcements." *Iori thinks for a while before he notices two figures approaching DM and Grave* "Hey thats Goenitz and Sakura. with them DM and Grave Can have a bigger advantage!" *Iori then standsup and tells Ashira to get Zero also known as Dualstrike to go help DM and Grave a bigger chance to overcome Zero the angel of darkness.* *G then looks at Iori and asks him a question* "Are you getting soft on us Iori?? You must be confident in your abiklities and very soon you will rise again and kill Zero the Angel of Darkness. So without further delay lets begin." *Mean while DM, Grave, Goenitz and Sakura are busy trying to hold off Zero until they can come up with a plan to give them an advantage over Zero the Angel of Darkness. Iori then steps into the chamber of Insight and face his inner fears and demons to complete the first part of his revival.*
Iori Yagami:"Only one of the bloodline can control such power, such power can only be mine!!"
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 09-02-2005, 11:13 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 09-02-2005, 11:57 PM
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