17-10-2006, 06:11 PM
Nope, not a clue where you got the term from. 
Ah, I finally found some time to read this! I usually don't read PSO Fanfiction, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. You describe well the interaction between your characters. Your action scenes are miles better than the usual PSO fanfic writer's, and you have gained my interest for the plot. Just who is this mysterious Pink?
That FOmarl Vivian seems scary! I get a bad feeling whenever she appears.
Looks like you need a proof reader for this story. Can I?

Ah, I finally found some time to read this! I usually don't read PSO Fanfiction, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. You describe well the interaction between your characters. Your action scenes are miles better than the usual PSO fanfic writer's, and you have gained my interest for the plot. Just who is this mysterious Pink?
That FOmarl Vivian seems scary! I get a bad feeling whenever she appears.Looks like you need a proof reader for this story. Can I?
| Mirinee | FOmarl | PURPLENUM | Green Robes | Level 190 | PSOBB Skyline 1 |

