Phantasy Star Engine

[Particle Ghost]

(First post, go me! Nice to be here!)

Well, I've posted this about the place on various forums and the like, but beyond a decent reception on the official PSU boards, it went with next to no replies elsewhere. So, now I'm posting it here - one of the biggest Phantasy Star Online forums out there. I won't bother posting on how I came to write it (I'm fed up writing it out); so if you're really that interested in the 'making-of', head over to the Fan-Fiction section on the PSU message boards and read it there.
I keep chopping and changing things, so this version is somewhere in the double figures. But anyway, here it is: part one of the first chapter. I'll post the following chapters, plus a short synopsis of what to expect, if it garners enough attetion. But we'll see...

EDIT: Bugger, I'm a thousand characters over the text limit! Double post time; what a start!