04-03-2007, 04:08 PM
Alright, you may post now! 
I read this, and it's PSO, yey! Pretty good read. Good scene setting and accurate/believable descriptions of the creature and the hunters. Better than most of PSO fanfiction I've come across.
Get rid of "[censored]" in "a kind of [censored] spawn? Looks funny. XD
The extremist group sounds like Arkz to me. Is your Arks actually Arkz?
Welcome to Ragol Forums. I love PSO fanworks, so hope to see some more.

I read this, and it's PSO, yey! Pretty good read. Good scene setting and accurate/believable descriptions of the creature and the hunters. Better than most of PSO fanfiction I've come across.
Get rid of "[censored]" in "a kind of [censored] spawn? Looks funny. XD
The extremist group sounds like Arkz to me. Is your Arks actually Arkz?
Welcome to Ragol Forums. I love PSO fanworks, so hope to see some more.
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