05-03-2007, 04:13 AM
I was just joking when I said "you may post now". It's okay to double/triple post if it's because of the word-limit problem when you're posting a fanfic.
Looks okay to me. Why do you need indents between paragraphs? Double enter is enough for word processed text, right? You don't need to go as far as censoring with [censored] or apostrophies. It's alright. XD Don't need to apologise for the spelling/grammar. I know how hard it is to proof-read your own writing. Get help from a friend or something.
Haha, I think I'm going to like your version better. Don't need PSU! *Dodges the PSU fans*
I agree that the Ep.III plotline is ridiculous. The whole game seemed to be unfinished to me. The gameplay is actually pretty good, but the plot could have been given more thought. I digress. Heh, I would have chosen a different name, since Arks reminds me totally of the one-three-three-seven sounding Arkz. ;D
Looks okay to me. Why do you need indents between paragraphs? Double enter is enough for word processed text, right? You don't need to go as far as censoring with [censored] or apostrophies. It's alright. XD Don't need to apologise for the spelling/grammar. I know how hard it is to proof-read your own writing. Get help from a friend or something.
Haha, I think I'm going to like your version better. Don't need PSU! *Dodges the PSU fans*
I agree that the Ep.III plotline is ridiculous. The whole game seemed to be unfinished to me. The gameplay is actually pretty good, but the plot could have been given more thought. I digress. Heh, I would have chosen a different name, since Arks reminds me totally of the one-three-three-seven sounding Arkz. ;D
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