Mission on Gal De Val Fanfic

[Kaasha]

Here's my fanfic I've worked on for a bit, hope u like it!

Chapter 1:
The Briefing

S 109 slowly walked down the ramp toward the teleporter to the right of The Chief’s side, happy that he’d passed the Hunter’s Exam, but then stopped and looked at Elly doing what looked like typing in some coordinates for Cal to analyze.
“Hey, come here.” Elly said. S 109 did as he was asked and walked in front of Elly.
“Yes?” he replied.
“Just one question.”
“Shoot.”
“Your name, why is it so…old?”
“What do you mean ‘old’?”
“Well, other androids have real names like Elenor or Kireek; speaking of which, what happened to Kireek?”
Trying to think of something, S 109 coolly said:
“It’s a long story Elly, maybe I’ll tell you later, after I explore what The Chief wants on Gal De Val.”
“OK, good luck S 109!”
“Thanks, I might need it.”
Turning back to the direction of the teleporter, S 109 continued his walk down the ramp, looking out the window to Ragol’s surface below, wondering if he’ll be fighting the same monsters or not. He walked into the door to the teleporter to Gal De Val and activated the icon labeled ‘Central Control Area’; soon he found himself in a misty area he’d never seen before with a giant locked door with three red bars on it.
“Well, this should be fun.” S 109 said as he pulled out his Yamato, swinging them around to warm himself up for combat. He headed for the teleporter on the left, but when he saw a computer next to the large door, his attention shifted. He walked toward the console and searched its logs. “1 item found” the screen read.
“Hmm, this could be useful; maybe I can download that data and send it to the lab, this may help in their research about the explosion.” S 109 thought.
After downloading the data, he activated the lab communication console and transferred the data to Elly, hoping that it helps in their explosion research. S 109 went back to the teleporter and looked at his three options to go. Debating where to go first to deactivate the island’s security mode.
“Where to go first, the Jungles, Mountains, or Seaside?” he pondered. “Well, I do like sea sides, but this isn’t a vacation, I’ll go to the jungles.” He activated the Jungle Area North option and as soon as he knew it, he was at a lush jungle full of plants he’d never seen before, along with beautiful cliffs covered in plants and moss paired with waterfalls.
“Wow! I’ve never seen anything like this! This is amazing! And I thought the forests looked good!” S 109 said as he paused and looked around. “Well, that’s enough sightseeing for now, I’ve got a mission to do, no time for dawdling.” He said as he started his mission in the jungles of Gal De Val…