new charcter ideas

[Mini_Bert]

....I'm just being real, who said they were fun anyway(just wondering), I'm just saying that you need to be more creative and less focused on just YOUR character, thats why I split everyone up in TPOT, so that everyone gets a fair hit in the story, and your Sidestories from my stories themselves you put yourself in the story long before you were actually introduced which is fine, but you didnt have many original ideas, your third story better not be about you and being "invicible" or "godly". O and in your sidestory you made up your own ending, like you try to absorb the power of the sages, when in my story that wouldn't happen, I'm not criticizing your writing ability, I'm criticizing your ability to interpret my storyline, I can't criticize you or your writing ability until your third story is written.