16-06-2004, 07:56 PM
Faulkie Wrote:Thats quite a good story, except that Pioneer 2 took 7 years to get to ragol, therefore, he could not just sneak onboard then suddenly be on ragol!I had to make twist in the storyline to make it more interesting and in your story in the one about Ameya and Rouge do those three dots at the end mean your going to add more.
worm = De Rol Le
computer = Vol Opt
demon = Dark Falz
Thanks for reading! (if you did)
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