Fan Fic: Contamination

[Azbats]

It oozes suspense which is lovely thing to see and remindes me very much of War of the Worlds and the cyclinders that were fired from Mars

Interesting also to see a piece that doesn't look like it's going to be set on Ragol either. Remember you can only post 10,000 characters per post, so you'll really have to chop it up into different posts [my piece was 6 pages long and 18,000 characters, so you're looking at about 6 - 7 posts for 20 pages, lol

Good luck. promising start