29-08-2004, 04:37 AM
it's not bad at all, the only advice/constructive criticizism I can offer is to make sure you keep things symmetrical. The human body is the same on both sides so you have to make a curve on his right side for his waist. Also, you may not want to make his shoulders that broad, even though it's a guy, you should have his shoulders sloping (slopeing lol) downward a little more. The only guys with shoulders that broad are huge football player types. Other than that, though, not bad for someone just starting out, don't quit on drawing regardless of what anyone says, I've been fighting through criticizism and I'm actually pretty good now.
PSO is a game of my past but those I came in contact with are still a part of me.
Strength comes not from the size of your muscles, but the depth of your heart, and the cause you're defending with it.
Strength comes not from the size of your muscles, but the depth of your heart, and the cause you're defending with it.

