31-08-2004, 07:17 PM
ummm...there are some typos in there
. ummm, some tips, you could add dialouge (however its spelled) or perhaps an Introduction and/or Prolouge just to make it a bit more story like
. Its look great though
. ummm, some tips, you could add dialouge (however its spelled) or perhaps an Introduction and/or Prolouge just to make it a bit more story like
. Its look great though
Anti-Snarf

