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Fan Fic: Contamination
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"Fucking christ.." Kangae let his head meet his palm yet again, telling himself that the visions wouldn't come true. But it was that hollow sort of reassurance that only made you sink deeper.

"The Hunters will be gathered at the suspected invading points, while the military will act mainly as scouts for where reinforcements will need to fill in. Other than that there's just the automated scout ships that'll be recording the action from the outside. Of course, edited footage is going to be fed to the public to keep them calm." Martha added, regaining her composure.

"Not like it matters what the damned reporters say when there's something eating you alive."

"Kangae, I was at the school, I know what you've seen. But your still-" The newman rose from his position abruptly, upsetting his place at the dinner table.

"I've see my family, my friends, even people I don't know devoured every time I close my eyes. I've been wounded in my dreams and torn to pieces in my nightmares. I've gone through all this bullshit and I certainly don't need anymore, not from them, and not from you.." A quiet settled in the dining room, the receivers of the ranting not quite sure of anything they could say. After getting no reply, he let out a trembling breath and turned from them.

"I don't know If I'm going insane, or something's happening to me that I don't know of, but something is wrong we me. Sometimes it just feels like it's clawing at my insides, struggling to get out. I'm in this for my revenge, My friends didn't deserve to die that night, nobody deserves to die tomorrow. But they are, more and more people are going to be killed by these things, no matter what I do. So of course I'm irrational and depressed, its fucking doomsday." Heading toward the door, he raised a hand.

"I'll be back later tonight, I just need some fresh air and some time to think." With that he left, not even sure if he would live to see his family again, not even sure if he wanted to. Maybe the only thing dead set in his mind was one thought, he was going to make those things suffer..

* * *

So thats that.

The two things I wanted to accomplish with this chapter was some more character development, and play around with some ideas I've been having for magic users.

Kangae = Sore loser, no? Tongue

Anyway C&C is always welcome. Hope this has proved worth while.
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Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 14-08-2004, 04:03 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Azbats - 14-08-2004, 04:56 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 14-08-2004, 05:00 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by rena-ko - 14-08-2004, 10:27 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 14-08-2004, 10:35 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Shifty - 15-08-2004, 10:16 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 12:12 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 03:56 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 03:57 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 03:57 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 03:58 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 04:00 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 18-08-2004, 04:04 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Lionheart - 21-08-2004, 04:52 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 21-08-2004, 08:03 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Freaky kid - 21-08-2004, 12:40 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Lionheart - 21-08-2004, 07:41 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Mikaelus - 21-08-2004, 07:47 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 21-08-2004, 08:44 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Lionheart - 22-08-2004, 04:01 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 11-09-2004, 11:27 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 11-09-2004, 11:28 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 11-09-2004, 11:30 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 11-09-2004, 11:30 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Vahn RAmar - 15-09-2004, 04:51 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 15-09-2004, 06:33 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Vahn RAmar - 15-09-2004, 10:22 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 16-09-2004, 11:20 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sheik - 27-09-2004, 09:04 AM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 27-09-2004, 08:03 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 27-09-2004, 08:05 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 27-09-2004, 08:06 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 27-09-2004, 08:07 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 27-09-2004, 08:07 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sheik - 27-09-2004, 09:15 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Feline Witch - 28-09-2004, 07:08 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 28-09-2004, 10:04 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 28-09-2004, 10:05 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 28-09-2004, 10:06 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sheik - 28-09-2004, 10:49 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Feline Witch - 29-09-2004, 06:27 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Sagasu - 29-09-2004, 09:27 PM
Fan Fic: Contamination - by Feline Witch - 29-09-2004, 09:42 PM

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