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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic
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Possibly my best story yet. This one was so good, even Albert said so. So there. Actually I forget, but what the hell...

Notes: This story is also original, and nearly all characters are mine. This is the story of the third generation, and is also DarkMagician's last adventure...

Prologue: After DarkMagician spared Robin, he allowed him to stay with him. Eventually, DarkMagician's daughter Terra married Robin and soon gave birth to a boy. All seemed well...

The year now is 2058, DarkMagician and Sakura are both growing old, as are the rest of his friends. Terra and Robin were adventuring with their now-adult son, Rhys when a mysterious light appeared in front of them...

Chapter 1: A Bad Feeling -Overworld tune, 1 character-Phantasy Star 3:G.O.D
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"What do you think this could be, Terra?" Robin asked her calmly. "I don't know...should we try to touch it?" She suggested. Suddenly, a robotic voice was heard, "Whoever finds this capsule, listen carefully...I am ROB:type-08. Myself and Ultima are in dire need. We have been set upon by a new enemy. We cannot kill them, and we are running out of time. We are going to drop this here, and flee to the ruins. Please hurry!....*crackle* No! They're here.....run Ultima!....*sounds of running, followed by explosions and shooting*....." The capsule went silent. "This can not be good..." Robin said slowly. "We'd better tell DarkMagician. Maybe he can help..." Terra started. "Right. Terra, you and I shall get DarkMagician. Rhys...you stay here." Robin commanded. As Robin and Terra went out of view, Rhys pulled out his short sword, "Not likely. I shall have a look for myself!" He thought, as he ran towards the ruins...

Terra and Robin arrived at DarkMagician's home, and as they entered, Sakura greeted them. "hello Terra...?...what's the matter? and where is Rhys?" Terra took a breath, "Mother, where is DarkMagician? We must tell him about a capsule..." DarkMagician walked in. His hair had now turned white, and he wore glasses. "...the capsule that ROB left? I already know. I had a vision last night of this, but I did not believe it would happen..." Robin raised his eyebrows, and spoke up. "Anyway, what shall we do?" DarkMagician took his glasses off and put them in his pocket, "Sakura, round everyone else up, Terra and Robin, run back to the ruins. Rhys is already there if my vision was correct. I shall teleport myself there...understood?" Terra was shocked, "Rhys is there!?! We told him to wait for us! He has never actually fought a real enemy...let alone one powerful enough to rout ROB and Ultima..." "Anyway, let's go! Quickly Terra! We can still stop him!" Robin shouted as he ran out the door...

Rhys walked through, into the ruins. He entered a large chamber. He looked around, there were scorch marks and bullet holes in the walls. "Getting a bad feeling about this, Rhys?" A voice called out from the shadows. "Who's there? Come out and show yourself!" The figure stepped out... "You...Why are you here old man? Hahah! Leave this to me!" Rhys laughed out. DarkMagician frowned "I may be old, but I am still the most powerful out of us all, so turn back Rhys! I'll not let you pass!" Rhys snorted, "No chance! It's about time I had an adventure of my own! So...move grandfather!" DarkMagician smiled, "Rhys is as stubborn as I used to be..." He thought to himself. "Rhys, I will make you a deal. If you can defeat me in a fight, I will let you pass alone. If you lose, I escort you further in. Deal?" Rhys frowned, then laughed, "Hahahah! Alright then DarkMagician. I will beat you up, and you can leave it all to me. Have at you!" He drew his sword...

They stood there, in silence. DarkMagician pulled out his glasses, and cleaned them as Rhys charged. He put them on, and cast a foie at Rhys, who somehow evaded it. "Good, Rhys. Most cannot dodge that foie. Now....eat....this!" DarkMagician shouted, as he cast a boosted Shifta on himself. They leapt at each other, Rhys slashed upwards with his sword, DarkMagician punched downwards. They both landed flat on the floor. ""Ugh..." DarkMagician said, as he started to get up, but by this time Rhys was already charging him. *shhwish* Rhys' sword cut DarkMagician's arm deeply. "AAgh!" DarkMagician shouted, as Rhys laughed, "Do you submit now DarkMagician? You're too old for thi...AAGH!" DarkMagician punched Rhys upwards. "Idiot! Never give your foe another chance by taunting!" DarkMagician yelled, as he teleported above Rhys. He kicked him downwards again, and Rhys hit the floor with great force. DarkMagician landed silently on his toes next to Rhys' battered body. "Well? Am I still too old, Rhys?" He asked slowly. Rhys snorted a laugh, as DarkMagician cast Resta on them both. "Come on, we'd better hurry!" DarkMagician said, worried for his friends. "Oh, one last thing..." He held his hand out, a small phial lay there. "Take this! It is my Final Remedy. I have worked on it for a year. It will resurrect you, heal you, boost your power, and make you invulnerable for 10 seconds. Be warned, you can only use it twice however!" Rhys took it curiously. "Come...let's go!" DarkMagician called, as he ran on...

Chapter 2: An Old Friend Is Lost... -The Nearest Place To The Heaven part 1-Phantasy Star Online-

Terra and Robin arrived at the same time as Sakura and the rest. "That was quick!" Robin said aghast at Sakura's speed. "Let's see...better check our forces...heh...what do we have?" Robin queried. An aged PETE spoke up. "As far as we know, Rhys and DarkMagician are both in there up ahead, ROB and Ultima are being hunted by a new enemy, and out here we have myself, you, Terra, Sakura, Sleppy, Infinete and DAN. Jamie is on holiday, as are Aeris and Sephiroth. Kaiser and Sabur have killed each other through constant battling, and Nei is exploring elsewhere. Things aren't looking good..." PETE shook his head, Terra then spoke, "Okay...I make that...9 of us are searching for ROB and Ultima. DarkMagician is capable enough, and he is with Rhys. I say we should all go in a large group of 7, agreed?" Everyone nodded. "Let's hurry!" Sakura said out, as they ran in...

DarkMagician and Rhys were walking along a long corridor in the second floor of the ruins. "So...you predicted I would run here?" Rhys asked, after DarkMagician told him of the events at home. He nodded. They carried on walking. "It still amazes me though..." Rhys started. "What does?" DarkMagician asked. "I am young and strong, right? Well I just got trounced by an old guy. It's amazing!" Rhys said in disbelief. DarkMagician stopped and laughed. "Fool! I have conquered enemies the likes of which you cannot begin to imagine. I have much experience, you had none, I trust our 'disagreement' back there taught you some lessons? Hahahah!" Rhys was about to reply, when he saw it. A trail of nuts and bolts along the floor up ahead. "DarkMagican...look at this..." He called out. DarkMagician put his glasses on. "...no..." "What is it?" Rhys asked, puzzled. "These...I think they came off ROB. He is an android you know...hmm..he must have been badly hurt. There are more scorches along the walls too...we MUST hurry." They ran up into the next room which was pitch black. "Here's the light switch!" Rhys activated it and DarkMagician shuddered at the sight on the floor...

Sakura and the rest had just entered the corridor before the room Rhys was in, when they heard a loud scream. "NOOOOOOO!!!" Everyone jumped. "That sounded like DarkMagician!" Infinete shouted, "Come on!" They all ran inside...

It was ROB:type-08. His body had been shattered utterly, and the smoke from the scorchmarks was still fresh. DarkMagician walked up to him. ".....It's irreparable...ROB is gone...forever...DAMMIT!" He punched the wall, and a piece crumbled off. Everyone else was silent. ".....We'd better hurry and try to save Ultima. I do not see any signs of him yet..." Sleppy said out quietly, and slowly. "...Indeed. That is what ROB would want. Come...let's hurry on!" DarkMagician replied, as he ran toward the next door. They all entered a small room, and found yet more bullet holes and scorch marks. As they walked through, Terra called out, "Wait! Look at this!" They ran back. It was UltimaGamer's Club of Laconium. It was split in half, and had blood on. "....." DarkMagician was silent. "I thought Laconium was unbreakable by any other material?" Rhys asked. "This is awful...these new enemies can break Laconium!?! Everyone, BE CAREFUL!" PETE shouted, as they continued walking...
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 19-01-2005, 02:35 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Dkgamer - 19-01-2005, 03:16 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 20-01-2005, 01:21 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 09:41 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 01:22 PM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 02:15 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 02:36 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 24-01-2005, 09:56 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by DarkMagician - 27-01-2005, 10:46 AM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 27-01-2005, 02:33 PM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 01-02-2005, 02:23 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 02-02-2005, 11:32 AM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 07-02-2005, 09:43 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 08-02-2005, 01:06 AM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 08-02-2005, 04:49 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 10-02-2005, 10:24 AM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 18-02-2005, 01:13 AM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 20-02-2005, 06:50 PM
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