12-02-2005, 03:04 AM
heres the first chapter. Its a little rusty and needs improving but ill let you all see it anyway.
Chapter one:The past
No!! *Yells Iori as a man in a darkened cloak swings at a boy near him* NO IVAN!!!!!!! *Yells Iori as he helplessly watches his friend get slayed by an assasin* Iori then wakes up from the dream as his alarm clock goes off*
Oh not that dream again. Why do I keep having it?? What does it mean?? anyways I must get going as i have a tornament to fight in today. *Iori then begins to run out the door towards the big tournament.Iori then starts to speed up drastically* "Huff..Huff... I cant be late or I'll be removed from the big tourney."
*As Iori runs around a corner he bumps into a woman and knock her to the ground *Sorry i didnt mean to knock you down. *Says Iori as he gives the woman his hand to help her to her feet. Then the woman looked at Iori with cold eyes and hit him with a zonde and said* You deserve that you idiot!! Cause of you I may be late to enter the big tournament!! *As Iori recovers from the blow he looks at the time and starts to head for the tournament again*
"Finally im here." *Says Iori as he goes to sign up for the tournament* "I wonder who my first opponent will be?? *Iori overhears someone talking*
"I hear that that this year we have some really powerful people in the tourney." *says one little boy* "Yeah I heard that the Great Dark Magician will be here to fight!! I hope i can get an autograph from him!!" *Says the second boy*
Hmmm Whos Dark Magician?? *Thinks Iori* Ive never heard of him before...
Chapter one:The past
No!! *Yells Iori as a man in a darkened cloak swings at a boy near him* NO IVAN!!!!!!! *Yells Iori as he helplessly watches his friend get slayed by an assasin* Iori then wakes up from the dream as his alarm clock goes off*
Oh not that dream again. Why do I keep having it?? What does it mean?? anyways I must get going as i have a tornament to fight in today. *Iori then begins to run out the door towards the big tournament.Iori then starts to speed up drastically* "Huff..Huff... I cant be late or I'll be removed from the big tourney."
*As Iori runs around a corner he bumps into a woman and knock her to the ground *Sorry i didnt mean to knock you down. *Says Iori as he gives the woman his hand to help her to her feet. Then the woman looked at Iori with cold eyes and hit him with a zonde and said* You deserve that you idiot!! Cause of you I may be late to enter the big tournament!! *As Iori recovers from the blow he looks at the time and starts to head for the tournament again*
"Finally im here." *Says Iori as he goes to sign up for the tournament* "I wonder who my first opponent will be?? *Iori overhears someone talking*
"I hear that that this year we have some really powerful people in the tourney." *says one little boy* "Yeah I heard that the Great Dark Magician will be here to fight!! I hope i can get an autograph from him!!" *Says the second boy*
Hmmm Whos Dark Magician?? *Thinks Iori* Ive never heard of him before...
Iori Yagami:"Only one of the bloodline can control such power, such power can only be mine!!"
Stupid forum rules.....:'( no more bunny
Stupid forum rules.....:'( no more bunny