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My first Fanfic
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Chapter two Part-1:The big Tournament
*As Iori beats his first opponent he gets a glimpse of DM* "O so thats the legendary mage.. he looks very powerful... hey what the?!?!
*Iori was then thrown to the ground and punched relentlessly in the stomach* "Damn i thought i beat you already!! *Yells Iori as he kicks the opponent in the face*
*Iori then dashes at him and punches him with flaming fists* How do you like that!! *Yells Iori as he is declared the winner of the match*
Ohh that feels good *Says Iori as he sets his chair to massage his sore body* So thats who DM is. I bet i could beat him hands down in a fight. *Says Iori as he starts getting cocky* My next match is tomorrow so I might as well get some sleep. *Iori wakes up the next morning. He heads for the door but something catches his eyes* Whats that *Iori asks himself as he heads toward the window to see* Isnt that the girl I knocked down yesterday getting mugged by some thugs??
It is *Yells Iori as he rushes out to help her, but when he gets there she is unharmed and every thug is on the ground paralyed by her spells*
Whew you are good with magic. Anyways im Iori who are you? *The girl replies* I am the Lone Wolf Ria and i am your next opponent in the tourney so ill see you there and i will wipe the floor with you. *Says Ria as she walks toward the Tournament and blows a kiss at her next victim*
Damn she seems to be very powerful so I'll have to be quick on my feet to beat her. With that said I must be going *Says Iori as he walks towards his next battle*
Alright *Says the annoucer* The second match will begin now. Its Iori Yagami VS Ria the lone wolf. we will be sure to see some really interesting moves today.
Ria i do not like hitting women but since your my opponent and i must win ill make an exception. *Says Iori*
Oh wow i feel so special cause you are going to hit me *Says Ria in a sarcastic voice*
Iori dashes at her and punches her with a flaming fist and right after he hits her she launches a series of powerful zondes at Iori and stuns him*
Damn I cant move!! *Iori then gets uppercutted and sent into the air* Owww so much for being quick on my feet *Yells Iori as he hits the ground with a thud*
I cant move. If i dont get up soon ill.. oh crap *Says iori as Ria starts charging up a Gibarta spell which freezes Iori's body*
Ok this determines it Ria is the winner. Tough luck on Iori to win this he cant lose more than two more times and has to do an extra battle to reclaim his position *Says the annoucer as Ria walks out of the arena. Then some nurses russh toward Iori to unfreeze him and treat his wounds*
Damn *Says Iori as he punches a hole in his wall*
Well im pissed about losing but Keliann will be getting home for work soon. She always finds a way to cheer me up some how.
*Just then Keliann walks into Iori's room and sees the hole* So you lost again? *Says Keliann as she hugs Iori* Yup and to a woman named Ria that had incredible spells and she was really strong too. Well im going to sleep *Says Iori as he lays down* I Guess i will to. *Says Keliann as she lays next to Iori*
Iori Yagami:"Only one of the bloodline can control such power, such power can only be mine!!"
Stupid forum rules.....:'( no more bunny
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 09-02-2005, 11:13 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 09-02-2005, 11:57 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 10-02-2005, 09:39 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 11-02-2005, 03:20 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 11-02-2005, 09:55 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 11-02-2005, 12:45 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 01:54 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 12-02-2005, 02:31 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 02:36 AM
My first Fanfic - by Ria - 12-02-2005, 02:38 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 02:43 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 03:04 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 12-02-2005, 03:21 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 03:59 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 13-02-2005, 12:53 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 13-02-2005, 03:01 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 13-02-2005, 09:36 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 13-02-2005, 10:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 14-02-2005, 05:07 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 14-02-2005, 08:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 14-02-2005, 04:50 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 14-02-2005, 09:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 12:13 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 15-02-2005, 12:16 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 12:22 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 01:06 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 15-02-2005, 01:31 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 01:46 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 15-02-2005, 07:53 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 17-02-2005, 10:28 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 19-02-2005, 03:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 19-02-2005, 04:05 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 19-02-2005, 08:54 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 20-02-2005, 01:30 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 20-02-2005, 01:44 AM
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 21-02-2005, 05:19 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-02-2005, 02:25 AM
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My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 02:43 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-02-2005, 02:48 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 23-02-2005, 09:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-02-2005, 07:35 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 24-02-2005, 09:39 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 26-02-2005, 06:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 28-02-2005, 12:16 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 28-02-2005, 01:37 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-02-2005, 03:34 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 28-02-2005, 09:50 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 28-02-2005, 04:22 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 28-02-2005, 06:09 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 01-03-2005, 12:46 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 21-03-2005, 07:14 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 21-03-2005, 09:58 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 21-03-2005, 04:04 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 22-03-2005, 03:35 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 23-03-2005, 03:26 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-05-2005, 07:25 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 23-05-2005, 08:33 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-05-2005, 08:38 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 24-05-2005, 02:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 25-05-2005, 11:41 AM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 25-05-2005, 01:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 25-05-2005, 09:42 PM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 26-05-2005, 04:18 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 27-05-2005, 01:02 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 27-05-2005, 04:06 AM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 27-05-2005, 12:56 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 27-05-2005, 02:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 27-05-2005, 02:17 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 27-05-2005, 10:36 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-05-2005, 12:49 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 28-05-2005, 01:01 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-05-2005, 06:27 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 29-05-2005, 04:21 AM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 31-05-2005, 03:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 31-05-2005, 08:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 24-06-2005, 05:59 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 24-06-2005, 09:23 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 18-08-2005, 07:32 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 29-08-2005, 04:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 29-08-2005, 06:07 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 18-01-2006, 04:43 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 18-01-2006, 10:11 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 16-03-2006, 04:54 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 21-03-2006, 04:43 PM
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