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My first Fanfic
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ok here it is chapter three

Chapter three: The Betrayal
*Iori and the others run out to meet the enemies head on and they noticed something odd*
*Ria looks ahead and sees DM chanting a spell that she has never heard and fires a shot at a demon in front of her and yells* Iori DM is up to something you must stop him or else!!!
*Right then DM casts a very powerful Shifta and Deband on the demons and Zalure jellen on Iori, ria, keliann, kain and tiffany .*
Damn its too late!! I feel weaker *says Iori as he falls to the ground. DM then moves in to kill Iori and right when he gets there a figure in a cloak covers Iori and teleports him to a safe area*
HUH HOW DID YOU SURVIVE GRAVE?!? *Yells DM in an angry/confused voice*
I thought i killed you back then.
*Then grave replied* You did kill me but i joined the undead army and i am here to get revenge against you!!!!!!!!!
*Grave pulls out his scythe and launches it at DM and it cuts his right leg*
Damn my leg!! RESTA!!!
*Then DM's wound is sealed up and DM dashes at Grave strikeing hiw with his summit moon*
You will cease to exist Grave, It doesnt matter how many times i have to kill you. YOU WILL PERISH FROM EXISTENCE!!
*Dm then grabs five glowing orbs and stabs the orbs into his chest*
This is it for you grave!!!
*Then DM's chest begins to glow and DM's body begins to glow with light*
*Then DM stands up and starts to walk toward grave . Grave then launches his scythe at DM and when it hits it breaks*
Damn how did that happen?!? It is supposed to be indestructible.
*Just then out of no where Iori comes flying out and lands three punches in DM's ribcage making him stagger back a few feet*
*Iori then gets up and activates his Dmonic Rush. Dm is hit over and over all over his body.*
Damn you Iori you will die for that!!
*Ultimate DM then launches a powerful Megid at Iori and when it hits Iori falls to the ground*
That should do it. *Says Ultimate DM as he looks at Iori's lifeless body on the ground. Just then Iori's body picks it slef up and Iori's hair is no longer red its black*
Heheh you have released me Dm for that I am greatful but now you must die. *Says Zero as he gets his energy whip out*
But how did you get released and who are you?! *Asks ultimate DM in a confused voice*
I am Zero. I am Iori's evil side and I can only be released when Iori falls into a coma or is in grave danger. I hate him as much as he hates me but for me to live he has to live so you see how that works.
*Then Dm disappears and Zero's whip latches onto DM's ankle pulling him down to the ground*
I can see everywhere you go DM and you cant do anything about it either *Says Zero while laughing. Just then DM casts a spell unlike anyother called demonic spear which encloses zero in a circle and thousands of spears come up out of the ground*
DIE YOU BASTARD!! *Yells DM. Then Grave sneaks up behind DM and whacks him in the back of the head causing him to black out*
Now Keliann and kain cast reverser on Iori then resta! *Yells grave as he throws DM into a river that leads to a waterfall*
That should take care of him *says grave as he gets ready to teleport back to the hunters guild to collect his money*
Wait, who are you?? Kelann asks grave*
I am the Undead Assasin Grave. We may have fought together now but i may get a mission in which i must kill one of you. *Says Grave as he enters the portal. Meanwhile at the bottom of the waterfall DM's battered body is picked up by a FOmar and taken to his house*
Oh dear boy you are much to young to die as you havent completed your destiny DM. *Says the FOmar with an evil smirk on his face*
Iori Yagami:"Only one of the bloodline can control such power, such power can only be mine!!"
Stupid forum rules.....:'( no more bunny
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 09-02-2005, 11:13 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 09-02-2005, 11:57 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 10-02-2005, 09:39 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 11-02-2005, 03:20 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 11-02-2005, 09:55 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 11-02-2005, 12:45 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 01:54 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 12-02-2005, 02:31 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 02:36 AM
My first Fanfic - by Ria - 12-02-2005, 02:38 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 02:43 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 03:04 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 12-02-2005, 03:21 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 03:59 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 13-02-2005, 12:53 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 13-02-2005, 03:01 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 13-02-2005, 09:36 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 13-02-2005, 10:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 14-02-2005, 05:07 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 14-02-2005, 08:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 14-02-2005, 04:50 PM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 14-02-2005, 09:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 12:13 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 15-02-2005, 12:16 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 12:22 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 01:06 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 15-02-2005, 01:31 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 01:46 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 15-02-2005, 07:53 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 17-02-2005, 10:28 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 19-02-2005, 03:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 19-02-2005, 04:05 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 19-02-2005, 08:54 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 20-02-2005, 01:30 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 20-02-2005, 01:44 AM
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My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 02:43 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-02-2005, 02:48 AM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 23-02-2005, 09:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-02-2005, 07:35 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 24-02-2005, 09:39 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 26-02-2005, 06:52 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 28-02-2005, 12:16 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 28-02-2005, 01:37 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-02-2005, 03:34 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 28-02-2005, 09:50 AM
My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 28-02-2005, 04:22 PM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 28-02-2005, 06:09 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 01-03-2005, 12:46 AM
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My first Fanfic - by Hayami - 21-03-2005, 09:58 AM
My first Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 21-03-2005, 04:04 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 22-03-2005, 03:35 AM
My first Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 23-03-2005, 03:26 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-05-2005, 07:25 PM
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 23-05-2005, 08:38 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 24-05-2005, 02:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 25-05-2005, 11:41 AM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 25-05-2005, 01:40 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 25-05-2005, 09:42 PM
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My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 27-05-2005, 01:02 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 27-05-2005, 04:06 AM
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My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 27-05-2005, 02:12 PM
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My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 27-05-2005, 10:36 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-05-2005, 12:49 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 28-05-2005, 01:01 AM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 28-05-2005, 06:27 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 29-05-2005, 04:21 AM
My first Fanfic - by God-IX - 31-05-2005, 03:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by zero132132 - 31-05-2005, 08:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 24-06-2005, 05:59 AM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 24-06-2005, 09:23 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 18-08-2005, 07:32 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 29-08-2005, 04:12 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 29-08-2005, 06:07 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 18-01-2006, 04:43 PM
My first Fanfic - by Poo Fly - 18-01-2006, 10:11 PM
My first Fanfic - by Talim009 - 16-03-2006, 04:54 PM
My first Fanfic - by Deadly Zero - 21-03-2006, 04:43 PM
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