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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic
Chapter 5: Creature Of The Dark

They walked on slowly. The corridors and rooms were becoming more and more cluttered and bloodied. Nothing lived down there, save DarkMagician and his party. As they walked, DarkMagician heard a click. "LOOK OUT!" He screamed, as a great boulder charged towards them. The door locked behind them also. "No! We're trapped!!!" Mirinee screamed, pounding the door. "Power Claw!!!" Kashima yelled, as DarkMagician shouted, "Shifta!" Kashima's claw turned into a glowing golden colour. "HAIIYAA!" He shouted, as he punched the boulder as hard as he could. It exploded into fragments, as the door unlocked itself again. "Urf.. are you two okay?" Kashima asked, out of breath. DarkMagician and Mirinee looked at each other, looked at Kashima, and nodded. "Okay, then...let's go!"

As they walked on, they could sense some malign power. Even more wicked than the one Dark Falz gave off usually. "DarkMagician...Just how strong IS RobDeLaMorte?" Mirinee asked, trying to break the silence. "I hope it does not come to that. If he is against us, we must flee!" DarkMagician said quietly. Kashima joined in, "Why?" DarkMagician shook his head, "Well, he's... He cannot be killed! He is undead." Kashima and Mirinee stopped. "Also, he is possibly the most physically powerful hunter that walked this planet. You saw those bodies back behind us. I only hope he has not become crazed..." "Oh I see... BACK THERE WAS NOT THE ACTIONS OF A CRAZED MAN!?" Kashima yelled sarcastically, as they approached the teleport to where Dark Falz resided. "He will be in here...Prepare yourselves!" DarkMagician commanded. They entered...

He was there. He sat on the altar, looking at the monolith. He called back without looking, "Hmph! More pathetic humans for me to kill..." DarkMagician walked up slowly behind him. "...RobDeLaMorte? It's me." He turned. He had changed much in the last few months. He looked both more powerful, and hateful. "DarkMagician! What do you want!" "We-we are going to escape the planet, myself, Kashima and Mirinee. Would you like to escape with us?" RobDeLaMorte frowned, "No. I finally found a reason to live. I am a battler, and since merging with Dark Falz, like Grave did long ago, I have grown stronger, and tire of your affairs." Mirinee leapt up, "Please! We will need your help!" "No!" Kashima frowned, walked up to RobDeLaMorte and hissed menacingly, "You WILL help us RobDeLaMorte!" RobDeLaMorte glared at him, "And why should I? Dare you threaten me?" "Maybe I do..." DarkMagician suddenly shoved them apart, "STOP THIS! I WILL SEE NO MORE KILLING! RobDeLaMorte, if you come with us, you will be able to fight far more opponents, than if you waited here." RobDeLaMorte thought for a minute. ".....On one condition." "Name it!" "After I have...escorted you safely to wherever, you tell me where the Battle Royal is being held." "Deal." RobDeLaMorte leapt up, and drew his sword, Chi Gochisoo. "Then what do we wait for? Let's go!" He strode up to the monolith. "rrrRRRKAELLLOMIRNEVVEEESAA!!" A portal opened to the outside world. They walked through...

Chapter 6: Return To The Battle

They stepped out again, in a burst of bright light in the middle of the Battle Royal. "NO!" DarkMagician screamed, as he realised where they were. All of the hunters stopped fighting, as they were all temporarily blinded by the flash. RobDeLaMorte cursed, "Damn! DarkMagician, quickly! Absorb my magic powers, and teleport out of here!" "But won't you be..!" "JUST DO IT! I only require my strength anyway!" DarkMagician held his hand up to RobDeLaMorte's forehead, and drained the magic out of him. "Thank you...RobDeLaMorte. Die a hero's death!" DarkMagician shouted, as they teleported safely away. "Hah! It shall not be I, that dies today!" Some of the hunters got their vision back, and looked on in stunned silence, as they recognised RobDeLaMorte, The Undead One! He drew a deep breath, "COME ON YOU PATHETIC HUMAN WORMS! FIGHT ME IF YOU DARE! HHAHAHAHAH!!!" he screamed, as he dashed into the middle of them, hacking and hewing limbs and blood everywhere...

DarkMagician, Mirinee and Kashima re-appeared on a nearby hill, to the south. They looked back, and Kashima whistled, "You know DarkMagician... I'm glad you stopped us fighting...look at him!" RobDeLaMorte was easily visible, as he stood on a mound of bodies swinging his sword in all directions, soaked in blood that was not his, and many hunters, though insane, were steering clear of his wrath. "I wonder how many he will defeat before he falls...?" Mirinee said to herself. DarkMagician and Kashima stared at her. "Uh? What? What's the matter!?" DarkMagician and Kashima both rolled their eyes, "Nothing Mirinee... Come, let's hurry onward!" Kashima commanded, as they walked further south.

As the party walked on, they became increasingly aware that the land itself was overly too quiet. Eventually, even the sounds of RobDeLaMorte's last stand faded from their ears. They currently walked down a field, seemingly untouched by anyone. "This is unusual... There are no people...no bodies here..." Kashima noted. "What a lovely field this is... Perhaps we can take a rest here..." DarkMagician suggested. "Good idea! My feet hurt!" Mirinee seconded. As Mirinee walked further into the field, ahead of DarkMagician and Kashima, it hit DarkMagician. A terrible feeling in his gut, as though impending doom beckoned. "MIRINEE WAIT!" He screamed dashing towards her. He knocked her over, as a shot rang out...
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 19-01-2005, 02:35 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Dkgamer - 19-01-2005, 03:16 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 20-01-2005, 01:21 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 09:41 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 01:22 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 01:57 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 02:15 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-01-2005, 02:36 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 24-01-2005, 09:56 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 27-01-2005, 01:07 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 27-01-2005, 02:33 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 28-01-2005, 01:34 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 01-02-2005, 02:23 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 02-02-2005, 11:32 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 04-02-2005, 05:03 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 07-02-2005, 09:43 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 08-02-2005, 01:06 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 08-02-2005, 10:05 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 08-02-2005, 01:58 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 08-02-2005, 04:49 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 10-02-2005, 10:24 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 10-02-2005, 10:44 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 10-02-2005, 10:50 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 10-02-2005, 02:14 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 11-02-2005, 01:36 PM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 13-02-2005, 09:08 PM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 18-02-2005, 01:13 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 18-02-2005, 01:19 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 19-02-2005, 02:09 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 19-02-2005, 06:24 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 19-02-2005, 08:22 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by DarkMagician - 20-02-2005, 01:01 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 20-02-2005, 02:42 AM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 20-02-2005, 05:53 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Mirinee - 20-02-2005, 06:50 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 20-02-2005, 07:47 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 20-02-2005, 07:56 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 20-02-2005, 10:12 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 20-02-2005, 10:18 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Kashima - 20-02-2005, 10:22 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 21-02-2005, 12:06 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-02-2005, 12:09 PM
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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 21-02-2005, 12:59 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Hayami - 21-02-2005, 01:07 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-02-2005, 02:58 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Poo Fly - 21-02-2005, 03:22 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Ria - 21-02-2005, 04:53 PM
The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic - by Lance813 - 02-06-2005, 01:14 AM
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