20-02-2005, 07:56 PM
Come on people lets give dm a break i know criticism is in the spirit of making someone better but lets not make him feel bad , as it stands dm i like the story you have amazing writing skills that may or may not need to be refined depending on who reads but dont feel bad i am currently working on a fic i plan to post that will probably be ripped to shred by our more opinonated friends

