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The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic
*steps back* its your story, do what you want with her Smile
Apologies to my fellow ragol.co.uk Teammates, i'm sorry for leaving you leaderless, and even more so for not getting back. but i wish you the best of luck in my absence! i miss you all!
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Oh...Sorry Poo Fly...Naughty thoughts...Mmmyes, mahahahah...
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Can we limit the chit chat to about the fanfic only? Smile
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Real good keep up the storys i want to see more
:Travis! FoNewm- Lvl 59 / Ult-Ruins


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Copy the bunny to your siggy to help him achieve world domination!

Only the strong survive, The weak will only end up dead.

Many lives these two blades have protected,
As many as they have killed,
As i look into the blades reflection,
my blood covered lips speak no words.
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To walking dead: Thank you for seeing my superiority, mwuahahahah!

To Ria: Yeth Mithtress! *Hunches over, limps towards Saga Book six*
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Chapter 12: Healing

Down in the Forest in his old house, DarkMagician had been revived, and was being tended to by Logan. RobDeLaMorte and V were attempting to revive Tiffany in another room. "So...Grave has disappeared then?" DarkMagician asked, as Logan checked him over with a 'borrowed' Pioneer Medic's scanner. "Yeah. He didn't help at all. If it were not for my great skill, you would not have made it." Logan said confidentially. DarkMagician rolled his eyes, "Uh-huh...and what of Tiffany?" Just then, RobDeLaMorte came in. "Logan, we must have words." They walked out, and DarkMagician attempted to listen in. "...Tiffany...looks like...not getting better...nothing working...gone..." DarkMagician shot up to his feet, and paid the price for it. "AAH! My leg!" Logan peeped in, "What happened...? Why are you up!?" He asked exasperated. "We must save Tiffany! She saved us from zero, now we must save her!" DarkMagician said winceing from the pain, as he limped towards the doorway. "No! You may not enter her roo--oof!" RobDeLaMorte began, as DarkMagician knocked him down with a swift knee. "Don't..go in...there...fool! *gasp*" DarkMagician strode in, and beheld a sight that made his blood freeze over...

Grave meanwhile, was searching around the trench where Dark Falz's monolith resided. "Let's see... If the legends are true, it should be here...Aha!" Grave lifted up a small cluster of dusty rocks. "Hmm..." He cleaned them with his cape, and a bunch of crystals shone brightly in the darkness. "Bingo!"

Tiffany lay there limply. Not breathing, not moving. Her skin had turned deathly pale, and though she looked dead, a nearby monitor registered a faint heartbeat. "She is nearly gone, DarkMagician" V said, standing up. "Nothing worked... Star atomizers, Moon atomizers, hitting her, cpr...nothing." DarkMagician walked over slowly. "Leave me V! Leave me alone with her!" V started to protest, but DarkMagician's eyes were glowing bright purple again. V made a hasty retreat. DarkMagician leant over her, "Tiffany?" he asked quietly. No response. He cast reverser on her. Nothing. Resta. Nothing. He was panicking now, his magic had never failed before. "Maybe if I channel some magic?" DarkMagician placed his hand over her head, and his aura left him, and was transferred to her. She started to breathe again, though weakly. Her heart rate increased slightly, but she still slept. DarkMagician collapsed, weak from his efforts. "Logan...V...RobDeLaMorte... come here!" He rasped. They entered, "What is the matter now DarkMa..." V started, as they saw her breathing quietly. DarkMagician gasped, "I will...explain later. Go! You...you must find Grave, and find my old crystals...perhaps they can save her fully... Hurry! Leave now!" Logan nodded, and headed to the ruins with V immediatly. RobDeLaMorte waited a moment. "You gave her part of your life-force, didn't you? Why?" DarkMagician raised his head, "We...will need her help... for the true enemy... And I do not...know... If we actually killed...that demon zero..." RobDeLaMorte turned, and sprinted toward Ruins after V and Logan. DarkMagician shakily stood up, walked over to the nearby bed, and collapsed onto it...

Chapter 13: Conflicting Plans

Grave had returned back to the Ruins, after nipping up to Pioneer 2 to get his books. He currently sat on the monolith, reading carefully the ritual he needed to prepare...

Logan, V and RobDeLaMorte walked through the first two sections of the Ruins with ease, as the monsters were killed already. "I don't like this...where are the monsters?" Logan began. RobDeLaMorte suddenly halted. "You do not think... That Grave has been in here ahead of us?" V scratched his head, "Why? He does not know about what happened..." Logan started to run, he had a bad feeling about this. "Wait up!" V shouted angrily.

Grave finished placing the crystals into the correct slots on the side of the monolith. A giant head appeared, but this one had an angry face, with black and red colours. "You have all the crystals. What is your wish?" Grave laughed out loud, and said simply, "Power." A transformation took place, and Grave was bathed in darkness...

Presently, RobDeLaMorte, V and Logan burst into the room. Grave stood in front of them at the altar. His mask had been removed, and long hair grew down to his back, changing color every moment or so. On his chest, were the five crystals embedded. Grave himself looked stronger, and an aura of darkness emanated from him, even V could sense it. "Grave...Why?" Logan asked simply. Grave laughed out cruelly, "Now I will be the ultimate assassin! I shall be in control! Had I known the legends about DarkMagician to be true, I would have done this years ago! I may as well admit it now, I was the one who ordered your deaths!" RobDeLaMorte himself gasped. "YOU! You mean you were the one who started all this!? Unforgiveable! You die NOW!" He roared angrily. Grave merely laughed, as the three hunters drew their weapons...

Chapter 14: The final battle?

While this was happening, DarkMagician had recovered somewhat a few times. Each time, he poured more magic into Tiffany. By now, the colour had returned to her face fully, and it looked for all the world that she was merely sleeping lightly. "Wake...up already..." DarkMagician whispered, "I think...they...will meet trouble..."

Grave started off by sending his scythes around himself in a circle, using newly acquired psychic power. V and Logan attempted to enter the arc, and V promptly had his Agito sliced into ribbons. "Fuck! What are those scythes made of!?" He shouted aghast. Logan nipped over and under, and as he was about to hit Grave, RobDeLaMorte shouted, "Don't touch him! Otherwise yo--" Too late. Logan sliced downward as hard as he could, and was viciously repelled by Grave's new cloak. Logan fell to the floor, and was paralysed by the cloak's dark powers. "Shit! How do we beat THAT?" V said angrily, as he shoved Logan to safety out of the door. "Carve his cloak off! And hurry!" RobDeLaMorte shouted, as Grave threw his scythes at them, narrowly missing. RobDeLaMorte sliced at the cloak, but Grave somehow dodged it. "Pathetic." Grave snarled, as he cut RobDeLaMorte across the chest, once, twice. Then V hacked the cloak off with his other Agito. RobDeLaMorte leapt backwards, clutching at his wounds. He raised his hands. "...blood? I bleed...?"

V and Grave ceased fighting for a moment. "Hahahah, he made me bleed?" Then suddenly, a dormant memory came to V. Once, when RobDeLaMorte had bled by a Belbiter's bite, he had gone nuts. The entire Seabed Facility was destroyed, and they only got out in time thanks to a quick telepipe. V thought for a moment more, grabbed Logan again, and fled into a backup telepipe he had hidden. Grave watched RobDeLaMorte nervously. "What are you playing at?!" He called out. RobDeLaMorte started to ignore him, and spoke to himself, "Destroy...Blood...Grave...Adameon...Jut..." RobDeLaMorte looked up, his eyes turned into a crimson colour. "MORTAL WORM! I SHALL DESTROY YOU FOR DARING TO CAUSE MY SON TO BLEED!" Grave lost his cool. "What!? What are you talking about now?!!?" RobDeLaMorte carried on, "KNOW THIS THAN GRAVE, I AM ADAMEON. ROBDELAMORTE'S FATHER. HE HAS ALLOWED ME A FREE REIGN IN HIS BODY TO DO WITH YOU AS I SEE FIT!" He raised his hands, Grave flinched. "No! Wh-what is this?! I...can't...move!" "IDIOT! YOU MAY HAVE DARKNESS NOW, BUT WE ARE DARKNESS INCARNATE!" RobDeLaMorte laughed out loud, sending shivers up Grave's spine...

Blood leaked out of every part of RobDeLaMorte now, and he tore his shirt off, revealing Jut engraved on his chest in his own blood. "T-that symbol!" Grave screamed alarmed. RobDeLaMorte nodded, "THIS IS IT! WE PERISH, BUT WE DRAG YOU DOWN WITH US! WE WILL BE REBORN, FOR WE ARE NOT TRULY ALIVE, BUT YOU ARE QUITE MORTAL, NEW POWERS OR NOT!" Grave hurled his scythes at RobDeLaMorte, "Damn you! Damn you to a thousand deaths!" RobDeLaMorte shreiked laughter again, and finally "JUUUUUUUUUUUT!!!!!" RobDeLaMorte's body exploded, as pure darkness consumed and destroyed the entire Ruins area.....
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Chapter 15: After The Battle

V and Logan were on Pioneer 2 again, watching the Ruins explode. "Hmm...Maybe we should have a look..." V said thoughtfully. They returned through the telepipe, and all there was left was rubble and standing upright in the rubble...Chi Gochisoo, RobDeLaMorte's sword. Utterly unscratched, V walked up to it, and pulled it up. "I think they both..." Logane began. V stayed quiet, attaching the sword to his arm socket. All of a sudden, vast amounts of light converged on the sword, and it projected a recorded image of RobDeLaMorte. "If you watch this, I have perished. I will be reborn soon, maybe now, maybe up to a decade, but I WILL return. Until then, then... One other thing, I know it is V that will have picked my sword up, just a reminder; You lose my sword, your arse is mine! One last thing, during the time I am gone, I can reincarnate, though not as a humanoid..." the message cut out. "Well...that was...different..." Logan said confusedly. They took a telepipe to the Forest, to see how DarkMagician and Tiffany were holding up.

When RobDeLaMorte used his final attack, destroying the Ruins, himself and Grave, the planet shook. DarkMagician fell over, and as he was about to headbutt the floor, he was stopped. "!?" He looked up. Tiffany had caught him. "!!!" She was surrounded by an aura of magic, and DarkMagician swore he could see lightning in her eyes. "So we made it then!" She said quietly. DarkMagician nodded. "That earthquake woke me...What was it?" DarkMagician opened his mouth to reply, and just then a wolf walked into the room. "W-what the!?" DarkMagician blurted. It sat down in front of them, watching them. Tiffany charged up some magic, "No, wait Tiffany! See the mark on his head!" It was Jut. "What the HELL's going on?! Is that RobDeLaMorte??" The wolf howled at hearing this. "But...How? Why?" DarkMagician and Tiffany asked in tandem. "Perhaps you should look at this..." V called, as he and Logan strode into the room...

"So...He was reincarnated as a wolf?" DarkMagician asked after the hologram faded again. "Yes." Logan replied. "And what of the traitor, Grave?" V laughed, "He has gone...from one GRAVE situation, to another...Hahaha!" Logan started to laugh also. The wolf growled his disgust. DarkMagician frowned, as he slapped V. "Ooow!" "NEVER, make such a rubbish joke again, you hear me!?" "....." Logan laughed some more, and Tiffany sighed at the futility of it all. "So now what? Is it over already?" She asked. DarkMagician shook his head, "No...we did not recover the crystals, and without them my MASTER PLAN will not work..." V started to dance happily. Logan looked confused, and showed it in his first question, "What the fu--" "LOGAN!" "Nevermind..." V started to laugh, as he produced the crystals from his inventory pack. "Here!" He handed them to DarkMagician. DarkMagician burst out laughing, and slapped V on the back playfully, sending him to the floor. Tiffany looked bewildered also, "What...are... those crystals?" DarkMagician explained, "A long time ago, we found these magic crystals. When brought together, they can grant a wish to each person there!" He handed one to Tiffany, one to V, one to Logan and held up the other two. The wolf howled in dismay...
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Brilliant!
no others words for it!
Apologies to my fellow ragol.co.uk Teammates, i'm sorry for leaving you leaderless, and even more so for not getting back. but i wish you the best of luck in my absence! i miss you all!
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WRONG AS USUAL!

Superb, superior, Ultimate, Wicked, Brutal...
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you know what i mean...
Apologies to my fellow ragol.co.uk Teammates, i'm sorry for leaving you leaderless, and even more so for not getting back. but i wish you the best of luck in my absence! i miss you all!
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