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Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff
#71
im a bit far behind on current events about wats goin on and i wish i knew ill just read all the posts befor this one oh yea when the heart becomes cold you turn into a block of ice if you cant coop with it then that makes u weak take it and apply it to yourself make yourself stronger through the darker tiems of life or events
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#72
This was written by Rena. She can't use forums any more, due to the accident leaving her permanantly blind. I wrote down what she told me to, and this is the result.

Trust My Instincts

By Reanna

You can't look into my eyes anymore
The windows of my soul
But just trust my instincts, for ever more
I'm no longer but a foal

My eyes don't carry that spark any longer
The shine that made you fall in love
But just trust my instincts, i'm now stronger
Our hands fit together like a glove

I don't use my eyes to see
They're no longer required
We'll never learn the truth, will we?
So I hold the idea they became tired

My mind is the only tool I need
I sold my vision for happiness
But trust my instincts, and as you read
Forget my apparent distress

I have no vision, lost one sense
It doesn't matter to me
So trust my instincts, recompense
I'll live like this so let me be

No more tears for me to cry
No more rending pain
Trust my instincts and look up high
I'll be in the clouds and rain

Well then, i'll see you at the soirée
Don't mourn my loss, nor me
Trust my instincts, mi amoré
In my mind it's your face I see
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#73
What a beautiful poem; It really helps to understand what she's feeling. I want to read more of both of your great poetry, and please tell Rena that I'll always keep reading it! Even if she can't personally talk to us here at Ragol, I'm listening to what she has to say through her art, and through you!
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#74
yes please, very beautiful. i hope you both continue to share her poems!!
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#75
To be honest, its difficult to know what to say, Its a fantastic poem, you two are both very talented at these. I hope for the best for you and rena, may you deliver us such art forevermore Smile
Apologies to my fellow ragol.co.uk Teammates, i'm sorry for leaving you leaderless, and even more so for not getting back. but i wish you the best of luck in my absence! i miss you all!
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#76
A new poem from me, and a new poem from Rena.


Ice
By Reanna AKA Rena

In the dreams of love, I'm falling.
I hear the heaven and hell calling.

Who am I? Am I sane?

It's only hurting me,
the feeling of love.

But I still want to feel it, crushing my heart.
I want to see that where does this feeling lead.

Please feel it like I do.
Push your heart to move.

Secretly I'm weeping,
your smile is the poison for me.
I know that it's wrong to want you.
But you are so sweet sweet sweet and you have
already poisoned me without noticing!

Can you hear me praying?

Can you see me dying?

The Tears wont stop flowing on my cheek...
This emptiness is killing me...

I can feel a thin shell of ice on my heart, so cold and long.
And so the torture will go on.



[SIZE=2]Can I walk with you?

By Gareth AKA nomercy


I saw you coming, you had that smile on your face.
It was made from pure joy and love.
I felt the warm feeling and grace.

Tip tap top, the rain came and drop.

And I had the umbrella for both of us.

Luck or the mind "pop" ?

So I asked, "Can I walk with you?"
You looked at me and took my hand.
" Yes, I shall be forever with thou."

That's why I like to walk,
even if it's dark.

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#77
I truly adore both of these poems, so sweet and yet so true! You keep up the great poem-writing Nomercy, and please tell Rena to do the same!
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^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#78
Thanks. I'll tell her that. She said that being blind has made her writing more passionate. It's true, she's never even managed to SPELL that, let alone say it. XD
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#79
Yeah, I can imagine that coming up with beautiful poems like that must be very hard, even with vision; I believe that she's an amazing writer, and I'm glad she can become more and more passionate about her art no matter what happens!
You've gotten greater too, of course! Smile
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^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#80
XP Most of mine don't get written down.
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