My first Fanfic

[Grave_Guardian]

Hitting a women in the crotch, that is just plain evil even on my standards. Good otherwise.

[Deadly Zero]

yeah it is but Iori is now evil and she hit hi ther first

[Poo Fly]

now that was unexpected!
great story!

EDIT: by the way, did you have to kill of both my characters together?

ANOTHER EDIT:
my favourite bit:

Enough i surrender...please dont kill me.. ill do anything you want!! anything!!!
God for a girl you sure are desperate. *Says iori as he kisses her on the lips and drains the life out of her*
Hahah what a deadly kiss.

[Deadly Zero]

oh now that i think about those were both of your people. but dont worry there is more. they may be revived.......
chap 7 will be up bu this afternoon

[Poo Fly]

yay! i may be able to read it before i have to go home!!

[Deadly Zero]

i have half of chapter seven done ill post it up later on maybe tomorrow morning

[DarkMagician]

Now THIS...I am impressed with this....

I see that there are THREE MAIN FACTIONS.

Iori, possessed by evil, determined to kill all, with Fei.

Ria, Grave and Tiffany among others, trying to stop the evil and survive.

and of course DarkMagician, uncaring, unstoppable (Nearly). The wild one, pledging allegiance to none.

I await the coming of the next section.

But...ah...keep in mind some things...

If this happens JUST after my SIXTH story, which I suspect it does, or possibly during, I forget. Remember this; DarkMagician was still alive until book seven of MY fanfics. He cannot die forever here! Also, Ria appears in my seventh fanfic, so she may not die either.

[Grave_Guardian]

I believe that this story happens after mine DM. DZ can't wait till the next section.

[Deadly Zero]

ok heres chap 7

Chapter 7: Desperate times call for desperate measures

Ok ive got it *yells keliann* We can ask DM for help to kill Iori's freinds and whoever is controlling him to do these evil deeds!!
*Ria then smacks Keliann really hard sending her to the ground*
its couse of your boyfreind that two of our fellow hunters are dead!! wake up and smell the roses!! IORI IS EVIL AND MUST BE STOPPED!!
*Keliann gets up and runs to her room crying*
maybe you over did it *says grave*
we could recruit DM but if he betrays us?? then what do we do?!?!
*Ria tells everyone to go home and get some rest and then discuss the matter further the next day.*
*Meanwhile Iori, sakura, goenitz and fei are looking for a restaurant to eat at*
ughh im starving!!*Says Sakura in an angry voice*
hold on we are here the best restaurant in town The Palace!
*Says Iori hungrily. then sakura, iori , goenitz and fei walk in and order some food*
ahh so what now Iori?? should we go after the next victims or just wait a while??
*Iori answers* i think we will go after our next victim couse i sense he is here. yes im positive keiji is here.He can be a great addition to the team with his spells
*Keiji then walks into the room*
ok sakura you go charm the boy into joining us or just kill him.
Yes sir *Says sakura as she puts on some make up to make herself betterlooking*
just then Iori is attacked by DM who happened to be in the room*
damn you DM you will pay dearly for hitting me!!
*Then Sakura, Keiji, goenitz and fei step outside and watch DM and Iori fight*
*Dm starts by casting shifta and deband while iori activates his orochi powers. they then dash at eachother and start to punch and kick each other in an incredible speed. they then jump back and take a breather.*
So Iori you survived my attack?? yeah i did and so what its not like your attack hurt me much anyway!!
What you little!!!!
*DM hits iori with grants sending him a few feet into the air. Iori recovers from the blow and hits DM in the face with two flaming fists. Dm falls to the ground and is then picked up by iori and sent flying into the air and then kicked towards the ground.Iori reaches the ground before DM and does a spiral uppercut sending DM into the air a lil bit higher than he already was and burning him at the same time..*
Aghhh you b**tard you will pay!!
*Just then Fei steps in and helps Iori beat DM to the ground. they punch and kick him with flames all around them and then pick his battered body up and throw it to one side leaving him there*
Lets go.
*Commands Iori as he , fei, sakura, goenitz and keiji walk through a portal*
*Dm wakes up minutes later with a really mad look on his face*
damn that b**tard!! he and the one that looks like him will pay for that!!
*Just then Ria, Keliann, Grave, Nex, lila, and lila's sister lilka walk into the room and see DM laying there cursing under his breath*
well well well if it isnt the almighty DM laying there on the ground *Says Ria in a sarcastic voice*
What do you want RIA!!
Oh i want you DM. *DM then starts thinking and gets a weird looking smile on his face. then Ria knows that he is thinking of dirty things so she smacks him over and over again which only made him get up with a lot of anger*
YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT!!
*Then DM starts to charge a megid spell but is interupted by lila and lilkas magic cancelor spell*
What how did you do that?!?!
*Ria then speaks up*
DM we have a proposal for you to take or leave. We want you to assist us in killing Iori and his new group of buddies.
*Keliann then interupts*
No we cant kill Iori its not his fault something is controlling him!!
*Ria then speaks up*
Keliann will you shut up. Iori is not being controlled he has turned on us!!
*DM then interupts*
Ok i will help you under two conditions.
Ok what are your conditions *Asks Grave*
First one is: I get to kill Iori by my self unless i ask for help which i wont need, and the second is no one I mean no one bosses me around because if one of you do i will cancel the deal and attack you all. Deal??
*Everyone thinks for a while then they agree to the two conditions*
Hahah this is going to be fun *Thinks DM to himself*

[DarkMagician]

You sopped MY MEGID!?! L34!?

How!? How is this possible? Why is this!?