My first Fanfic

[Hayami]

Well it just did my friend...enemy i mean...
And how the heck can u have a megid lv.34?
Maybe DM is taking steroids!!! Who knows? <_< - = ->_>

And would sakura kill me if i didn't join the team?...
OMG what a world i live in -.-'
but anyway GREAT CHAPTER!! keep-it-up!!

[Grave_Guardian]

DZ, all I can say is keep it up... or else :evil:

[Deadly Zero]

yes hayami she wouldve ripped your characters balls off making him a girl lol. im jus kidding but she wouldve killed him though. and grave angry faces attack!!

[Deadly Zero]

heres part one of chapter eight. part two of it and and proably part nine are going to be just mostly talking and stuff.

Chapter 8 Part 1 : The power within

*Iori, Fei, Sakura and Goenitz return to their apartment to rest for a bit. upon arrival iori heads to the balcony to see the stars*
What am i doing this for?? turning on freinds and loved ones for revenge. IM a pitiful being that shouldve never been born!!
*Iori then turns to see Sakura looking at him* How long have you been listening Sakura? *Sakura replies* Long enough to know what you are fixing to do..
*Iori then makes his hands burst into flames* What now!!!!
*Iori is then attacked by Goenitz, Sakura and Keiji but not by Fei. Iori takes the blows and then sees Fei fade away into a pair of gloves which Iori then puts on*
This is my power combined with Fei's.
*Iori then kicks Sakura in the chest knocking the air out of her. Goenitz then throws iori up into the air with a few gusts of wind. Iori lands back on his feet and begins running toward the window and jumps oout of it*
Hey goenitz even iori cant survive a 50 floor drop or can he?
*Goenitz replies* no he cant hell die on contact with the ground. this solves onr problem for us though.
*Iori then opens his eyes to see his body floating in mid air being held up by a demon like looking fei with wings*
How is this possible?? what are you?? *Fei replies* This is my true form and this is your true form also.
*Iori then hits the ground with a thud and gets up and puts on the gloves fei became*
Lets see now what can these do??
*Iori stands up to see that he is surrounded by ria,grave,DM,Lila, Lilka, Nex, keliann standing around him with terror in their eyes*
Whats wrong arent you all going to try and kill me. *Keliann then pulls out a mirror and points it at iori so he can see himself. Iori sees that he looks like himself but with demon horns and black wings flowing with orochi energy and dark magic.*
WHAT ARE YOU???
*Iori replies*
I have released Zero the angel of darkness and merged with him.
*Iori then flies into the air while being shot at by ria which shoots at Iori and hitting everytime in Iori's torso. Iori then takes the rounds and fire them back at ria making a cloud of smoke appear letting him excape into the darkness of the night.
*Meanwhile Goenitz and the others tell Orochi what has happened with Iori*
Fools you do not know if hes dead?!?! He is the only one of us that Zero became a part of and if Zero is released we will have to side with his friends to destroy him!!!
*Meanwhile Keliann and the others are talking about what to do when Nex confesses something*
I got something to say to you all my name is nexus and an orochi blood carrier too and id rather help them destroy you all but we can talk later. Tonight Zero the angel of darkness merged with Iori's body amplfying Iori's and fei's power to an unthinakble force of destruction. We must stop iori before he realizes his true strenght and grows more powerful. The only way to stop him that i know of is to team up with Orochi and his soldiers to kill Iori.
*Keliann then looks at everyone and then runs out of the room crying. Lila and Lilka go after her to try and comfort her*
*Iori then thinks to himself*
This is what happened last time 15 years ago.
*Iori then has a flashback of an angelic warrioir killing off the orochi. then he remembers a demonic angel of death named Zero stood against him killing him and making an alliance with the orochi saying every 100 hundred years he would take the Orochis strongest fighter and merge with him to kill off the relatives of the angelic warrior.*
Thats why i felt starnge around Keliann shes the last ancestor of the angel that killed off most of my clan but then was killed by Zero.... now i must continue the work and kill keliann.
*Iori then goes to sleep on a cliff near the city watching the sunset but is interuptted by someone*
Hey mister can i have a lil help here?? *Asks a FOmarl named Ciel*
I need to find a man named Iori Yagami and give him this. *Then Ciel pulls out a pendant type thing*
This pendant was given to my brother ivan when he was 6 and i recieved one just like it but mine was black and his was red...
*Ciel interupts again* So your Iori and judging by the wings i presume zero has already mergd with you.
*Iori then looks at Ivan's pendant and sees that is starts to glow making his glow too. He then pulls his pendant out and fuses them together which causes a set of daggers to be made. one red dagger and one black dagger*
These are the weapons that ivan loved to use and now they are mine. i can feel his power flowing within me while i hold these daggers.
*Then Iori makes the daggers turn back into their pendant forms and embeds them in his chest*
Ciel i need a favor..........

[Hayami]

very nice! good work!
so cool, so cool!!
man i like these kind of demons that have wings and can fly like Iori.
very good descriptions as always
keep it up!! i await the next chapter!! WEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

[Grave_Guardian]

Ha DZ you still got it. Keep it up. Oh and :alien: :alien: :alien: :alien: aliens attack.

[Deadly Zero]

wooo i thought this part would be boring but necermind it is pretty good

[DarkMagician]

*Suprise ending*

DarkMagician teleports in, and prods Iori with his finger, after casting a level 285 Megid onto it. The end.

Ahahahah!

DZ, I await the next chapter.

And you were dead right about the dirty thoughts between me and Ria, KYAHAHAHAH! That IS what I would do, pretty much. Or just exclaim, "Oo-er"

[Deadly Zero]

after a long few months i have decided to continue my story here chap 9

Chapter 8 Part 2: Death and rebirth

Iori Yagami here is your next assignment sent by my boss which is someone you know. he owned a stone called the orb of heaven which is said to hold immense powers and is a tool needed for you to reach your true form and become the Destined child. you are different from everyone else Iori and you must get this orb to reach your maximum power. *Iori then interupts* woo woo woo what are you saying?!?! you want me to steal an orb to help me out? **iori sits down* I might do it but ill need something fast like a Z-Buster the newest model of motorcycle technology. *Ciel then answers him* ok ill get you that ride but you must get us the orb then we will go to your next assingment. Any questions? *Iori nods his head no and walks outside*
Ill do it at sunrise right now i have to see someone. *Iori goes to visit a woman named Brooke* Hey long time no see brooke. "Iori what the hell do you want!?!"
I came to apologize brooke about how i hurt you and im truly sorry but today may be the last day ill ever see you again. what im trying to say after today i wont be human anymore ill be a killing machine. so goodbye brooke... *Iori then walks away with a tear going down his cheek. Brooke then sees this and sighs to herself*
finally a tear is released he still has hope to live.*Iori then arrives at the museum and quickly finds the pendant in a vault and breaks into the vault* finally i will fulfill my destiny!!
*A shady figure then steps in and says before he can leave with the orb he must defeat him. Iori accepts the fight and releases his demon form. Iori then uppercuts the shady figure and starts to beat the living S**t out of him untill he realizes he is fighting himself. Iori takes a step back and then the shady figure disappears into ioris heart.* I gotta get the hell out of here before security arrives.*Iori jumps on the Zbuster and takes off down the road bout a mile down the road the police catch up to him and begin firing at him hitting him once in the shoulder. Iori then relases his demon form once more and covers himself in darkness releasing a Dark Soul which takes out three police cars and blows them up. Iori then pulls back on the on the handle bars and accelerates up to 300 mile per hour. Iori then spreads his wings and lifts himself into the air but is then shot in his left wing causing him to fall and hit the ground.he is then quickly surrounded. Ria, nex, lila,lilka, keliann,grave and DM.* Well well well we finally have you iori and now we will do the entire world a favor and kill you. *Keliann then steps in between DM and iori and defends iori* we cant kill him we must destroy Zero. *Ria replies keliann stand down or be killed also. Ria i wont back down i...i...*Keliann's pupils become smaller and then everyone looks to her stomach and see Iori flaming hands holding a dagger making a hole through her. keliann manages to finish her sentence.* I.....i..... lo...ve......him..............*Keliann falls to the ground and then ciel appears and sees Iori holding the orb and begins chanting the words gresply Nekram. everyone sees her and then look at the orb and see it glowing.* the ritual is now complete iori will be knocked out of existence and Zero shall be reborn!!! hahahaha the world will be at our mercy!!*Iori then sees the orb and his pendants fuse and then they attach to his fore head and leave an idention of an X on his fore head meaning the ritual was complete.Iori's body then begins to change his entire body is covered in black shining armor his eye turn completely black his wings become wings of bone with orochi magi fused with darkmagic inbetween the bones of the wings.then before him appears the Grave Shifter Zero's ultimate sword flowing with evil magic. he takes the sword in hand and faces Everyone ahead of him and sees fear and determination in their eyes to destroy him.

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Just read through the whole thing and I like it. I like it a lot!