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Pso Meets Zelda Fanfic.
#1
Heh heh. I have nearly finished the first chapter in my fanfic. Tell me what you think about it. Hyozanryu and mini Bert are in the first chapter, consider yourselfs lucky!

PROLOUGE.

In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, the seabed research center.
Hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...

But, Olga was defeated by the powers of Kireek,an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab, and the military...boy that was a mistake. The military was investigating the mines under the central dome with the asistance of Jean Carlo Montague and his two emotional robots, Elenor and Ult. He helped in bio-weaponary and the unsual density in the photons. But the rest of ragol was sealed of by the military. The council seem to have no control anymore...what will become of this planet of Ragol...

Chapter One: The 'hidden' lab?

On Pioneer 2, the hunters, forces, and rangers were pratically ended.
With Ragol out of order and the hunters guilds temporary 'unavailable'. Hunters were bored...
But one Hunter was about to change that...

Hyozanryu: Hey, mini bert. What are we going to do today?
Mini Bert: How should I know? Do you have an idea?
Hyozanryu: Yeah, see that guard over there? *Points to the transporter
to Island De Gal La VaL, where the guard is snoring* Grab your armor,
were going to ragol!
Mini bert: *Stands* Are you crazy what if we...
Hyozanryu: We won't, have had this planned out. I planted a Nar lilly's
poisonous mucus in his drink *Chuckles and reaches for his Stag Cutlery*
Come on. Its now or never...
Mini Bert: Well. Lets go.

Both of them sneak past the snoring guard and get transported to the seabeds...

Apon arrival, they both drew there weapons, Hyozanryu using his Stag Cutlery, and Mini Bert, equipping the Heavens Punisher [AN: I'm too kind...damn...]. They go into the first room. But the other door was open, they ran to it but then hid behind a wall. Two Rangers were talking, they, both fully equipped with Egg Blasters.

Mini Bert: *Wispering* What the hell are they doing here. I guess they're bored like us...
Hoyzinyu: No, listen. they are talking serious.

???: Hmph, where is it? The 'hidden' lab was supposed to be in this room. I just don't get it. They said these co-ordinates...
?????: Hey, lets go on further. We might find something on ahead

Hyozanryu: * Stands after he can't hear the guards* ??? What was that about?
Mini Bert: Who knows. Lets have a look for this lab. I want to find it.
I'm guessing those guys were employed by the military.
Hyozanryu: Yep, I think you maybe right there Bert.
Mini Bert: HEY! It's Mini Bert!
Hyozanryu: Okay. Sorry. * Says inside his head* Lol...
Mini Bert: Lets search the room.

Both of them started to look around, banging walls and climbing things.After an hour of searching they sat down.
Hyozanryu hears a sound coming from the wall. He stands. Then he runs to the other side of the room and charges towards the door...* BANG! *

Mini Bert: Hey, what are you doing?
Hyozanryu: * Attacking it with his Stag Cutlery * Hey. I heard some computer sounds. I...have...to...see...HAAAAAAHHH!!!!

Hyozanryu casts Rabarta on the wall. It freezes it, then he charges at it and breaks the wall falling down into some water * SPLASH! He gets up and wipes the water off him*.

Thats as far as I got last night, I'll add the rest of it on soon.
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#2
That's cool, and I don't see what's so far fetched about me having heaven's punisher......even though I never reallly wanted it lol..........I'm more into rifles........but the only one I can get is Ano rifle which is actually pretty good...............Aaaaanyway it's a really good start!
Mini Bert - Lvl 173 - RAmar
Dale Bert - Lvl 144 - FOnewm
Kinami - Lvl 121 - HUmar
Kyoneru - Lvl 103 - HUmar
Velaria - Lvl 87 - RAmarl
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#3
Thanks Mini Bert, I'll try to finish the first chapter before Jan 6th so you can read all of it.
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#4
It is good, but shouldn't it be on like fanficnet or something?
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#5
Two thumbs up.Big Grin

I liked it. What do you mean we are on the 1st ch. are you tring to say that we are going to die.:confused: :eek: Sad
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#6
Ya? Are we gonna die? Seriously, I'm stronger than IsaacRolleyes, try to keep us alive for most of the story at least..........
Mini Bert - Lvl 173 - RAmar
Dale Bert - Lvl 144 - FOnewm
Kinami - Lvl 121 - HUmar
Kyoneru - Lvl 103 - HUmar
Velaria - Lvl 87 - RAmarl
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#7
Congrats, I like it so far.
And I'm even not a normal reader. I ahrdly read at all, but this is interesting, Keep it up.^_^

PS: You need a character more? Like a cameo or anythingm due call.^_^
Yuni, HUnewearl: Lv 113 Kama: Lv 134
Phessisca, FOmarl: Lv 36 Kumura: Lv 112
Vordox D'igo, FOmar: Lv 89 Naga: Lv 172
Yuffie D'igo, RAmarl: Lv 54 Rukmin: Lv 131
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#8
heh heh. I have remodeled the prolouge and have shotened the first chapter, the hidden lab is now the second chapter.

PROLOUGE.

In the depths of the island De Gal La Val, a solitary island with lush cliffs and a huge mountain. Also a vast jungle. But there was hidden secrets to this island...A seabed research center...
This labatory was underneath the island. Near the central control area.The labatory housed famous scientists, docter Grave, docter Otso and there teams were working on project Olga. The docters came up with an AI Program so they could record observations from there experiments...
After the huge explosion, a research team was dispatched to find out what happened...they were never heard from again...
A month afterwards, the experiments were reacting to something. The scientists belived it was the density of the abnormal photons...
One week later hell broke lose when AI Olga went beserk. The labs were destroyed. All the projects perished due to the 'experiments' escaping...
All but one survived...clawing its way into the waste disposal center...

But, Olga, the mutated entity, that was found by two hunters, Kireek and Isaac. Olga was defeated by these two hunters. Now famous, but the powers of Kireek, an android. Known as the black hound. With his trusty Soul eater he braved the depths along with Isaac, the Double Saber wielding hunter. He also braved the depths with Kireek. These two defeated Olga, reported to the council, the lab and the military...boy that was a mistake...
The military soon began to take control of the 'pioneer project', the areas of Ragol were sealed off. The military began to investigate the central dome. They set up camp down there. Some High-rank hunters were asked to help with monster control. One of these was a ranger known as
Gala. Another known as Vahn [AN: Names taken from Legend of Legaia for PSone, a great game. I could never get a copy...damn...], a damn good hunter wielding a Dundral. They just fended off weak enemies for a high amount of pay. They were also instructed to eliminate any hunters that came down to Ragol with no exceptions...
Deep down in the ruins, the research teams were protected by some S-Rank Hunters. Such as Deadman, War and Farore [AN: My old DC characters].
And there were female forces helping out with curation of sickness a general A** Kicking against death Gunners. These were Alicia, Sakura and many others. There ultimate goal was to protect one scientist. He is young, but he is a genius in bio-weaponary and was mainly researching the density of
the abnormal photons. With his two hand-crafted robots testing out his prototype weapons. They were called Ult and Elenor. Elenor, being the older out of the two, was more obidient. Ult on the otherhand, had the tendency to wander off...
With these things going on, and the research of Island De Gal Le Val. Hunters have limited action. The Hunters Guilds were now unavailable.
Hunters, Rangers and Forces had nothing to do. One hunter was about to bend the rules, but does he know what is going to happen to him later that day...


Chapter One: The plan.

The catering areas of Pioneer Two were pretty full to the brim with Hunters, Rangers and Forces. With lots of money to burn...(Due to the fact of not having to buy healing items anymore...) they tend to waste it on eating, clothing, weapons they can't use. Within these boundaries The Forces were coping with it more. As they could just improve there mental strength by meditation, meaning there was no reason to train.Hunters, who really needed to practice, couldn't. The military took over the VR system in the lab and trained it's army in there...

This is where this story[AN: I mean fanfic...] starts...
Hyozanryu, a tall hunter. With a Dark blue costume, a Stag Cutlery and red spiky hair to boot, he was pretty cool looking person (Being in all the womens magazines and all...).
Mini Bert. At an Average hieght. Doned in a Purple/Green Costume, with long green hair. He equips a Spread Needle [AN: Was gonna be a Heavens Punisher, but he told me he prefers
rifles]. Both of them were a force to be reckoned with...a month ago, that is...
They both decided to meet up just outside of the Hospital near the labs to have a get together. Hyozanryu arrived first, he walked down and took a seat on one of the hovering chairs. Mini Bert came walking down the stairs [AN: I know it's a slope, but stairs sound better] and pulled up a chair. Hyozanryu looked pretty mythed...

Hyozanryu: Hey...you're late!
Mini Bert: I know, I know. I was held up by some issues with some girls.
Hyozanryu: Thats cool, I can...
Mini Bert: THEY were looking for you...
Hyozanryu: Sorry, but I have fans. Too many. Thanks for losing them, some of them seemed possessed. I was chased over half of Pioneer Two the other day, it keeps me active though.
Mini Bert: Now you're bragging Hyozanryu.
Hyozanryu: Okay! Calm it. It meant no offense you know...I'm sorry...ANYWAY! I have to tell you why I asked you to come here. Did you bring your Spread?
Mini Bert: Yep, go on then, tell me what you have to say then...* Gets a pillow ready *
Hyozanryu: Right, basically, to put it simply. We are going down to Ragol.
Mini Bert: Are you nuts! No way!
Hyozanryu: Just hear me out. Basically, we will go to the seabed research center for a bit of training. Since the Top of De Gal La Val is occupied with the military. I heard they're starting the seabed in a couple of weeks time. The transporter is guarded by a single guard. This guard is currently asleep for five hours. I put a Nar Lillies poison spit but diluted it thanks to the help of Alicia at the research center for how to do it. We will sneak into the transporter. Go down to the Seabed and look for the waste disposal area.
Mini Bert: What will we do there?
Hyozanryu: We will set several Gigan Bombs there and give it a half an hour countdown. Then we get to the transporter, get out here. The Island goes and so does the militaries commander, Leo,
goes with the island letting us get back to normality when this settles down...we can train again!
Mini Bert: This sounds like another atempt to get to destroy the military. How are we gonna get down there without being noticed? There are bound to be other guards.
Hyozanryu: Didn't you hear what I just said? There's only one guard, err guarding the actual transporter. I gave him a drink. We are all set to go
Mini Bert: ...and what if we fail?
Hyozanryu: Well, were, well. Dead.
Mini Bert: Let me think about it first.
Hyozanryu: We don't have time to do that! We ether go now, or never. Tag along if you want, but I'm going...

Hyozanryu gets up and puts his chair away. He then leaves to go to the lab, he didn't even gesture to Mini Bert. Mini Bert didn't want to die, but, he had nothing to do and it was likely they would be never allowed the same freedom again. He had no idea what to do. He could either:
-Go with Hyozanryu and risk his life to save the world or...
-Stay here feeling guilty on what he has done.
Mini Bert decides to stay, he would prefer to live a life of a coward.

Hyozanryu sneaks around to transporter, the guard is still asleep. He then enters the transporter very quietly...not trying wake the guard...he then pressed the button, hoping that the guard will not wake up...if the guard did well, he would be killed on the spot. He re-configured the settings for a slower transportation, not as much noise as the normal one. He was now on his way to Ragol...
little did he know that he know that he would be involved in saving the universe...


...well thats it for now, don't worry Mini Bert, you're in it later on.
Tell me if it's any better!
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#9
Arghh, I'm now a coward, and a freak with a green and purple suit........my suit is black and blue, not green and purple, and I'd rather not be a coward, but all in all, it's coolBig Grin! :mad: But if you continue to make me look like a coward I'll secretly assacinate you.
Mini Bert - Lvl 173 - RAmar
Dale Bert - Lvl 144 - FOnewm
Kinami - Lvl 121 - HUmar
Kyoneru - Lvl 103 - HUmar
Velaria - Lvl 87 - RAmarl
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#10
I know, you become the military leader of Pioneer Two later! Be grateful!
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