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Dusk the forgotten android
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As Finchy swept silently through the ferns and bracken-like plants surrounding her, she noticed an odd hole apparently ripped into the ground. Every one of her senses was heightened, if there was another armoured beast near by she would never deal with such a devastating opponent on her own. She lent over the hole to see a kind of ceramic material lining the edges of what once must have been a well. It smelled Dank and musty, her nose wrinkled at the stench.

As she peered inside the well, she noticed a small glint at the bottom; she marked the site with a radio-receptor and turning to her left saw a hunk of metal lumped on the floor. Curiously, she advanced towards it. It was an old android arm, possibly a relic from Pioneer 1. Then, startled, she noticed a long fine blade in its grasp. She picked it up and ran its' edge along the inside of her hand. She gasped as blood flowed from her index finger. It was still sharp after what must have been decades. Sharp as when it was created, it seemed. The sky was clearly visible along the fine blade, reflected, blue and ambient. It was a fine weapon; it must have been wrought by one of the masters of steel long ago, long ago on Coral when such substances were still plentiful and of good quality. There was a shout from behind her.

"Finchy" said a melodious voice. There stood the force, Warhawk and Scope. "We picked up your signal" said Scope bluntly. "Yes" said Finchy as if she had just come out of a trance. "It's over there, in that well". Scope walked over as the force illuminated the well with a pure white source of light. "Wow, it's an old android all right. Looks like a military enforcer, first of those Hucasts. Not one of our lot. Hey, hey Finch. Imagine what it could tell us eh? What stories he could tell..."

Finchy spun around with the sword in her left hand and the android arm in her right. "We should repair him" she commented without a second thought. Warhawk took a step back from the well, there was a clicking sound from inside his right shoulder pad and from the back of his head a laminated photograph was produced. "You should look at this sir". Scope took the photograph from the back of the androids head; it was a picture of the bottom of the well. It showed the back of the fallen jet black android. Four characters were clearly printed centrally on its back. They read 'D U S K'.
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#12
woooow...... how do you make it so good?
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Anti Hacker Wrote:I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again. Addicting food is less fun then having flesh eating termites eat out the back of your eyes and your optic nerves while you run around screaming "It feels like my brain is burning!" as you slowly lose your sight.
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#13
Cool keep it up!
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#14
yeah... i bet he does...it's most likely gonna keep getting better..
PSO Red King RAcast. PSU Red King red CAST Ranger online Universe 3 and 12
Anti Hacker Wrote:I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again. Addicting food is less fun then having flesh eating termites eat out the back of your eyes and your optic nerves while you run around screaming "It feels like my brain is burning!" as you slowly lose your sight.
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#15
All he could here was a buzzing sound. The darkness was finally lifting, bright lights, hummed overhead. He was spread out on some kind of work surface, he could not yet tell shapes and colours from one another, nor fully distinguish words, but something was happening. Someone or something must be trying to repair him.

"Why do you insist on working on that thing anyway? It has been thirty-six hours and no progress seems to have been made at all..." Scope interjects offhandedly. "Well if we're to have the team back at full strength again it is kinda' essential" Finchy retorted, as she put down the blowtorch. "That's enough for today, I carried out some research on this sword and if it's not another replica like the other hundreds I have seen it is the true Oritagito."

"Hah hah, yeah right, the true Oritagito. You know, if it is I'll give you Three-hundred-thousand meseta and that's a promise." As Scope walks out of the room, Finchy glances away from the white, plastic-like interior of the room, gleaming in a bright white light as she catches movement out of the corner of her eye.

The android sits up on the table, flexing its' restored arm. "Systems stable, operating system stable. Physical functions appear not to be abnormal. Where am I? Where is the beast? Where is my sword?"

Finchy gasps. The android leans over the table side, and picks up his masters sword. The sword of injustice, the sword of the pain, the memories that will never leave him - here in the faded future, it appears not even time can distance him from the events long ago in the forest of sorrow.
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#16
wow... nicley done anti.....
wish i could do stuff as good as that
PSO Red King RAcast. PSU Red King red CAST Ranger online Universe 3 and 12
Anti Hacker Wrote:I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again. Addicting food is less fun then having flesh eating termites eat out the back of your eyes and your optic nerves while you run around screaming "It feels like my brain is burning!" as you slowly lose your sight.
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#17
just read the whole thing so far and its amazeing nicely done anti
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#18
i know.... how do you do it anti?
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Anti Hacker Wrote:I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again. Addicting food is less fun then having flesh eating termites eat out the back of your eyes and your optic nerves while you run around screaming "It feels like my brain is burning!" as you slowly lose your sight.
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#19
My secret is, to use complicated words and to describe every little detail, in as much detail as possible!
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#20
interesting.. lol... theres got to be more to it.. ive tried that before
in a story and it didnt go too well
PSO Red King RAcast. PSU Red King red CAST Ranger online Universe 3 and 12
Anti Hacker Wrote:I've probably said it before, and I'll say it again. Addicting food is less fun then having flesh eating termites eat out the back of your eyes and your optic nerves while you run around screaming "It feels like my brain is burning!" as you slowly lose your sight.
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