My first Fanfic

[Deadly Zero]

well im back from mexico and i feel depressed cuz i fell in love with a girl for the first time in my entire life.her name is yasmin, and i didnt get to say goodbye to her either... well i may be going back to mexico this december to see her and my dad. if not this december then next summer for the whole summer yay.
well i was working on the story and on my bday my lil sis fried the circuits in my hardrive making me lose everything including the new chapters. ihad like three more chap. finished. right now im at school working in the computer lab well when i replace the harddrive ill be back up and writing but untill then youll have to wait

[Talim009]

well its good that ur back Deadly Zero we will finally be able to read more to the long awaited fanfic that u made woohoo.

[Poo Fly]

tis a shame you lost your hard drive, don't keep us waiting too long though!

[Deadly Zero]

well i lost everything now, i thought i had a back up of my fanfic but i didnt save it..... i had the next 4 chapters done and started the 5th but no worries i will have to copy and paste the part of the fanfic already here to a disk and redo the character pages (Its where i kept each characters info like good, evil, whose character it is. ill keep you updated as long as i can from the comps at school untill they block this site which they wont do very easily as i have a virus that can bring down the program that blocks all the sites... heheheheheh hahahahahah *Begins coughing* damn

[Poo Fly]

Hehe, I hope you can sort it all fairly easily, and i'll look forward to more from you

[Talim009]

Tis been a while and i still await the moment when you bring us another chapter to this fanfic so much of us wait for. Must have writters block or somtin lol.

[Deadly Zero]

ehem i apologize for my long absence but the next chapter is complete and i will upload it tomorrow becuz i wrote it on paper and know i must type it up again so tommorrow my fic continues after like a 6 month delay. lol and im over the girli fell in love with becuz now i go out with jackie and im starting to fall for her even though shes 2 years older than me lol

Chapter 9:The rebirth of Zero the Angel of Darkness
*Everyone just sits there staring at Zero and are frozen for fear.* "Bah enough of this!!!" *Yells DM and Grave as they charge at Zero striking his armor over and over again only to find that not even a scratch was left on the shining black armor.* " Fools you cannot get past this armor even if you all were to attack me nothing would happen!!!" *Lila and Lilka then start chanting a spell they slowly fade away and woman appears from where they stood.* "I am Brooke. I am the one that Iori saved 10 years ago and ive looked up to him as a brother and i will not allow you to destroy him!!" *Brooke then looks at Zero and charges him striking him in the chest piercing the armor hitting zero causing him to groan in pain.* "Damn how did you do that?!?! You will not defeat me so easily!!!!" *Zero then pulls his sword the Grave Shifter out of the ground and swings it at Ria hitting her arm and breaking it. He then roundhouse kicks Keiji knocking him to the ground. He then jumps up in the air and comes down on Nex almost killing him on contact.*Ria then begins to shout orders* "Everyone pull back, we cant afford to take another attack of this magnitude again as he almost killed us all with one attack!" *Ria, Nex, Keiji, start retreating while brooke picks up kelianns corpse and DM and Grave hold Zero at bay* *meanwhile in some dimension Iori wakes up to see a distorted world which is Zero' past and his put together* "Ahhh what the hell happened to me...better yet where the hell am I?" *Says Iori as he looks around the distorted world. Iori then gets up and sees someone or something approach him.* "Who the hell....Ivan i....is that you??? But I saw you die.." *Ivan then dash at iori kicking him in the face and then punching him in the chest causing him to stagger back. Iori then swings at ivan to see him change shapes.* "Iori I am the shapeshifter known as G and I am the one who decides your fate from here on but first you must defeat me and two of my best soldiersknown as Ahira the master swordsman and Zero the dualblade master." *Ashira and Zero then charge at Iori striking him in the chest and legs knocking him to the ground with exetreme force. Iori gos to get up just to be attacked again and again.* "Whats wrong Iori do you need a little motivation??" *asks G as he turns in to Keliann and begins yelling at Iori* "Your not her she would never say that to me!!!!" *Iori then powers up and charges at Zero ripping through his flesh and then tears Ashira into pieces and looks over at G.* "You scared yet?!?!!"*G then replies with laughter "Fool look again they are perfectly fine. I think i should let you know you cant hurt us but seeing how you choose to fight back against your most loved one keliann you have passed the first step and we've decided to help you but you must complete a set of tasks before you can regain your body. Come now Ashira and Zero we must guide Iori through this little quest he must take on." *Iori then looks at G, Ashira, and Zero ang luaghs* Did i scare you so much you decided to help me....pathetic." *G looks at Iori with a stern look* "Iori i dont think you know this yet but zero has been revived, keliann has been killed by you, lila and lilka fused together to form brooke again, ciel has zero under her control and yours friend were almost wiped out with one blow. Keiji, Ria, and Nex are almost dead DM and grave are putting up a good fight but cant hold out to much longer without reinforcements." *Iori thinks for a while before he notices two figures approaching DM and Grave* "Hey thats Goenitz and Sakura. with them DM and Grave Can have a bigger advantage!" *Iori then standsup and tells Ashira to get Zero also known as Dualstrike to go help DM and Grave a bigger chance to overcome Zero the angel of darkness.* *G then looks at Iori and asks him a question* "Are you getting soft on us Iori?? You must be confident in your abiklities and very soon you will rise again and kill Zero the Angel of Darkness. So without further delay lets begin." *Mean while DM, Grave, Goenitz and Sakura are busy trying to hold off Zero until they can come up with a plan to give them an advantage over Zero the Angel of Darkness. Iori then steps into the chamber of Insight and face his inner fears and demons to complete the first part of his revival.*

[Talim009]

I really like this chapter and my chara ter appears on it woohoo. Thanks deadly zero this story is getting better with every chapter you post on this site. Your work is amazing. Keep up the good work.

[Deadly Zero]

Ill see ifi can work on the next chapter later today but i have to work from 4 to 10 then i have somework to do on my 5 page report due on friday and im still on the first page!!! ah well it will be up in a couple of days
umm sorry for the delay i havent been near a computer in a while and mine has no internet but by the end of may im getting a laptop and im getting my internet service turned back on now that i work well ill post the next chapter as soon as possible
ignore the laptop thing again like last year my mom planned a surprise trip to california. what is it with her and surprise trips. i dont have internet but i can access it with my PSP while im at work and transfer the next couple of chapters for you all to enjoy

Ok im in school and i still have access to a computer with internet plus i bought my laptop (it cost me $727.40) and im getting DSL on it within the next month ill post the nextchapter this friday for a fact if i dont post it ill cut off my thumb......lol

Ive been in the hospital for cutting off my thumb lol. I keep forgetting to continue the story and ive been having some probs with my girl but weve worked out most of em. I think im gonna make this next chapter interesting by letting you all write the next part and posting it up and then ill take them all and sort of combine them as best i can and well see how it works out.