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Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff
#21
theyre just hatters and cant appreciate good work must of been drinkin that haterade lol.
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No matter wat you feel you will never escape the fear
No matter wat you do you can never escape death.

All is brought to an end when we see the big glaring ball of light that will end us all.
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#22
Life
It slips through my fingers
Flowing slowly away
As it leaves me
It takes away trouble and strife

The bond of two
Carries to the next
To the new world
Where love will be returned
Unrequited

If this world would just
Shut up for a while
Maybe things would be different
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If I don't know what lies beyond
Desire is now the one in control
Am I strong enough to not ever know just what I'd find?
Should I press on?
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#23
Ah, another masterpiece! your poems are all so sadly realistic. would this non-shutting-up world have anything to do with our non-shutting-up world?
your poems tend to make me think a lot about how crazy the realities of your topics really are, which is a great thing to have in a poem. keep writing!
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^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#24
Really?I idn't think that last one was very good.I'm just making them up as i go along.
[Image: nomercycopy.png]
If I don't know what lies beyond
Desire is now the one in control
Am I strong enough to not ever know just what I'd find?
Should I press on?
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#25
Eh....? ....Uhh...yeah, great poems. Keep writing or typing or thinking or whatever it is you do.
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#26
oh RENA I didn't know you write poems.WOW!you must be very thaughtful your poems are great I couldn't write any poem that good.
A nobody.......a shadow of someone who truly exsists.I am a nobody.
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#27
Heres one about my favourite FF character,Squall!

I've built walls,a fortress deep and mighty,
That none may penetrate.
I have no need of friendship,friendship causes pain.
It's laughter and it's loving i disdain.
I am a rock,i am an island.

Don't talk of love,well i've heard the word before.
It's sleeping in my memory.
I won't disturb the slumber of feelings that've died
If i never loved i never would've cried.
I am a rock,i am an island.

And a rock feels no pain.
And an island never cries.
[Image: nomercycopy.png]
If I don't know what lies beyond
Desire is now the one in control
Am I strong enough to not ever know just what I'd find?
Should I press on?
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#28
Nice one! once again, you made a poem that involves thinking and good refference. and by the way, that last one was great!
[Image: sillystorytitlepagechriae0.th.png] [Image: sosukegg9mt.png] [Image: psusig2tn1.th.png] [Image: RoxasmySoxas.jpg]
^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#29
Well,to be accurate,its kind of about my brother as well.
[Image: nomercycopy.png]
If I don't know what lies beyond
Desire is now the one in control
Am I strong enough to not ever know just what I'd find?
Should I press on?
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#30
Hey!Since when did you get so good at poetry,anyway?Oh well.
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