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Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff
#31
This is hilarious. The poems are good and they can move someone because they are composed of words and words make people feel things. Most poetic artist can only write about the sad aspects of our world. Anyways keep up the good work RENA and NOMERCY your gonna let your sister beat on writing poetry lol.
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#32
nomercy Wrote:Hey!Since when did you get so good at poetry,anyway?Oh well.
You know what would be REALLY funny? If she replies to you and says, "Overnight." XD XD XD XD
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#33
That would be funny lolBig Grin well anyways keep up the good work
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#34
Who is ready for some Mecha?Yes,no,maybe?I'll post it anyway.Chapter one of my mini-novel,Delta Wing.


Delta Wing
It was icy,much more so than yesterday.But to Tori Rei,that didn't matter one bit.Walking through his home town of Aegis,he was oblivious to the rest of the people wrapped up in layers of warm clothing.It was almost as if he didn't even know they were there.All he wanted to do was to be left alone,and yet,the world seemed to resent this one wish.He carried on walking,away from the hustle and bustleof the town and its inhabitants.Eventually,buildings and roads gave way to hills and fields.Then he saw it.The only place he felt truly calm and at peace.
The oak tree was at least three-hundred years old.He didn’t really understand what it was that made him come here.Maybe it was that no-one ever came here but him.Tori walked slowly over to the old tree,and sat down.It was sunset already,and the view from the hill was mesmerizing,at least to anybody else.But for Tori,this was just another reason to be alone.It wasn’t long before he drifted into deep thought.Maybe he would have drifted deeper,but a voice lifted him from his soul.Angel.Angel Imawano was the only person who understood Tori at all.In turn,Tori fascinated Angel,with his dark,cold eyes,but also with the soul behind the eyes.She knew something had happened to him in the past,and was determined to find out what it was.
As members of the anti-terrorist group Delta Wing,they were thrown together during many missions,so they spent a lot of time together.At first,Tori completely blanked Angel,or gave one word answers to any questions she proposed to him.But,in the end,it was him who came to her.It was back when they were on a routine patrol...
The whole city had been leveled.It was one of the worst terrorist bombs ever known,even rivalling the power of the A-bomb.The Commander didn’t expect anything to happen,so it seemed to him like a good idea to send the two rookies out to see if they could handle their mechs properly.After all,it was a normal patrol,nothing could possibly go wrong.But something did.Tori and Angel took different routes through the ruins,in order to patrol the area quickly.Unexpectedly,a group of rogue mechs,piloted by those who had left Delta Wing after stealing their mechs,saw Angel,all on her own,and decided they would get themelves a piece of new equipment.She was not any normal rookie though,and her mech,a Model-8 Tornado Pharoah was no pushover.But,faced with five mechs,she didn’t have a prayer.It turned out that she did.Through the communicator in Model-8,her plight was heard.By Tori.He raced to a nearby rooftop using his radar.Tori’s speciality was sharpshooting,and that was reflected in his choice of mech.The J-213,codenamed Ice Rifleman,carried a Pinpoint Cannon,and it was this that he used.Two mechs fell before they knew what was going on.The other three quickly advanced on Angel.Seeing her position,Tori leapt from the rooftop and landed in front of Angel,just as the first mech launched an attack.The attack pierced J-213,and both fell.But it was only Tori who got up again,as he knew that a blast from his cannon at close range could destroy just about anything.The other two attacked quickly and then fled,leaving Tori injured.While he was in the medical wing of the base,he got to know Angel a lot better.She felt that it was her fault that Tori was hurt this way,that if she was a better pilot and fighter,this wouldn’t have ever happened.The two of them became close,with Angel helping him when he got out of hospital.Maybe they even loved each other,but neither would admit it.Angel was the shy sixteen year old,and Tori always seemed to be detached from the world,as if he didn’t really belong.
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#35
Great mini-stiry thingy lol well keep up the good work
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#36
that's one great mini-story! can't wait to read the next chapters, it seems like the story is just going to get better!
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^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#37
You might have me beat in stories,bro,but i win easiy with poems.

Legend

You will always be here for me
You told me that
As you held me close
And kept the darkness at bay

The moon would rise up
High in the heavens
The cries of owls would startle me
I would weep in your arms

I wept again, and again
When you walked away
Through the mists of life
Became a legend in one night

When that legend became a myth
It was hard to let go
Then I remembered your words
‘I will be here for you, always’

It was then that I decided
Whatever lies beyond the morn
I was not facing it alone
You’ll be there with me

My one true love
My one and only Legend
I still remember when
You held me that first night
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If I don't know what lies beyond
Desire is now the one in control
Am I strong enough to not ever know just what I'd find?
Should I press on?
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#38
This is gonna be good....i'll call it..."Battle of the Siblings!"
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#39
awwww, what a sweet poem! that's.....beautiful!
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^I like my PSO characters ^and my egg (may he rest in peace) ^and my PSU characters! Smile ^ Organization 13 :p
Axel: "Now that all of your cards are gone, I will eat yoooou!" Larxene: "Sorry Axel-you couldn't eat your way out of...air!"
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#40
This one is called No Mercy.

You stood before me
Blocking my path
You told me you loved me
Then cut me in half

You would cry
Ask for help
And i would be there
No matter what

I would stand before you
Defend you from those
That would harm you
Why did i bother?

From now on i remember
That you made me like this
I became this for you
Now i have No Mercy

I cannot love
I cannot hate
I don't care for life
I don't care for death

I have No Mercy
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