Nomercy's and Rena's Stuff

[Kitsadoodles]

that poem is beautiful, touching, and emotional. reading this poem, anyone can understand and feel your pain (I swear, I'm SO close to crying!) which makes the experience so much easier to share with others. I really enjoy reading when the author puts so much of themself into the poem that you know what their whole world is about! congrats on another beautful poem.

[nomercy]

I just wish i didn't have to write it at all.

[Kitsadoodles]

that's true too. but you know, bad things happen, and we learn from them. hopefully, this'll all make you much stronger, and able to face your guilt and despair. no matter how much you think you may have messed up, there's always room to make yourself better!

[glowworm]

I hope you don't mind but here is one

Souless and despairing
Alone and no comfort
Cold and dirty
No-one to look up to

The ragged man
No home to return to
Begging and starving
The brink of death

Death, the only certainty
Death, the only pleasure
Death, the next adventure
Death, a new chance

Seemed appropriate for the theme......

[nomercy]

It's good. I like it.

I got real p*ssed off a couple days back, and wrote a song.

When I Split

One thing determines good thought
(Best of me, best of me)
I wasn’t so lucky with mine
(Empathy empathy)
For we live another day
(Closing it, closing it)
So we got what we got but why?

When I split
Right down the middle
Spill my insides
Hurts just a little
Split, split
Right down the middle
Swallow my pride
CHOKE!
Then I let go

Stop, wake up, these lines will help me find you
(Fade in, fade out, if that’s what ya got)
Go, give up, the two can get you through
Cannot deny, it cannot be spoken

When I split
Right down the middle
Spill my insides
Hurts just a little
Split, split
Right down the middle
Swallow my pride
CHOKE! CHOKE!
Then I let go

Stop, wake up, these lines will help me find you
(Fade in, fade out, if that’s what ya got)
Go, give up, the two can get you through
Cannot deny, it cannot be spoken
Stop, wake up, these lines will help me find you
(Fade in, fade out, if that’s what ya got)
Go, give up, the two can get you through
Cannot deny, it cannot be spoken

Do you believe there is a dark before the dawn?
Do you believe, do you believe that when you die you carry on?
(Do you believe)
I know the pressure makes you want to fly above
I know that you can rise above

Losing pace, I can’t stay in this place
And I can’t and I won’t and I don’t need you
Losing face, what a shame and a waste
And I can’t and I won’t and I don’t need YOU!

Stop, wake up, these lines will help me find you
(Fade in, fade out, if that’s what ya got)
Go, give up, the two can get you through
Cannot deny, it cannot be spoken
Stop, wake up, these lines will help me find you
(Fade in, fade out, if that’s what ya got)
Go, give up, the two can get you through
Cannot deny, it cannot be spoken

Denied, it cannot be spoken
Denied, it cannot be spoken

[Kitsadoodles]

that's a beautiful song, no matter how p*ssed off you may have been when you wrote it! I'd really like to hear it some day!

[Lee-yoshi]

Denied, it cannot be spoken...?

Sounds fairly familiar to something i've heard before... Zebrahead maybe? Hmm... *Goes through 'My Music'*

[nomercy]

I take a lot of inspiration from Zebrahead.

[Lee-yoshi]

A HA! I found your song, it's on the end of the track Dear You (Far Away) by Zebrahead, you didnt make those lyrics at all you fraudster you!

Haha, only joking, because it did make me listen through all my Zebrahead tracks again just to find that dam song, so there was no vein at the end of it all! ^_^ But no-one can match my intellect on tunes! XD

[nomercy]

Hmm...sis has been switching titles of documents again... I have to find the one i wrote, now...