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Dark Desires - A fanfiction by Pink
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#21
15-10-2006, 08:55 PM
Another great one. you sure do have a talent a writing. Keep up the good work Smile
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16-10-2006, 02:03 AM
that last chapter just really added a lot more to the story, and the characters! I love Cranberry's personality and willingness to help, it seems really sweet! let's all hope she and Pink become good friends!
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#23
16-10-2006, 02:14 AM
Kitsadoodles Wrote:that last chapter just really added a lot more to the story, and the characters! I love Cranberry's personality and willingness to help, it seems really sweet! let's all hope she and Pink become good friends!


Why thank you!
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#24
16-10-2006, 02:20 AM
*giggles* And just for clarification... this here Cranberry is the same that is represented in the story. She just mainly lurks here instead of posting. >.>
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#25
16-10-2006, 11:19 PM
WHOA! where'd she come from!?
anyway, hi. I like your character. you get that cat girl!!!!
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#26
17-10-2006, 12:13 AM
Kitsadoodles Wrote:you get that cat girl!!!!
Quite frankly I prefer the term "Kainekenjeru" (Pronounced ky - neck - on - jur - ou). Now I wonder if anyone can figure out where I got that term... Tongue
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17-10-2006, 06:11 PM
Nope, not a clue where you got the term from. Tongue

Ah, I finally found some time to read this! I usually don't read PSO Fanfiction, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. You describe well the interaction between your characters. Your action scenes are miles better than the usual PSO fanfic writer's, and you have gained my interest for the plot. Just who is this mysterious Pink? Tongue That FOmarl Vivian seems scary! I get a bad feeling whenever she appears.

Looks like you need a proof reader for this story. Can I?Smile
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17-10-2006, 08:07 PM
*giggles* Sure. I go about typing my stories without looking them over so there's bound to be a typo here and there. If you're looking for typos contact me either through PM, e-mail, AIM, or YIM if ye want to inform me of them.

Glad you like the story Mirinee, and you seem to be catching on to the characters quite nicely.

As for an expectancy of chapter 6... lemme deal with my 4 remaining mid-terms first so I can find some good writing time. Tongue This kitty's a bit in over her head at the moment... balance between assignments, studying, going to class, my 1 hour work-outs four times a week, AND writing simply won't happen. Tongue I promise there will be progress if not this weekend, then next weekend. After mid-terms finding time to write will be a lot easier.
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18-10-2006, 01:27 AM
Yay! Here's hoping yoy get through all right, which I'm sure you will! The brilliant mind that brought us Pink the Kainekenjeru couldn't possibly get bogged down by a few lousy midterms! Just get rid of them like you did the Deteriosaur!!! Tongue
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18-10-2006, 01:44 AM
Cept I've got a Chemistry mid-term tomorrow and because of the extreme amount of assignments I've had I've got all of 4 hours of cramming on my side against the thing.
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